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Maimaktes commented on Chapter 48 on July 04, 2020 05:44pm Liked

I inhaled this story. It is clever and well written, and I fell head over heels for your Buffy and your Spike.
I am OK with the fact that this is unfinished, because I can see the ending in my heart. <3

 

Thank you so, so much for writing and sharing!

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MaggieLaFey commented on Chapter 48 on December 10, 2019 05:56pm Liked

Ok so I'm very sorry you didn't finish the story, but boy am I glad you at least reached this point!! I've gotta say that if you ever got back to it to write about the reunion too I certainly wouldn't mint it ;) but even like this I wanted to tell you that I'm super grateful to you for having shared this on the interwebs, it was a fun ride and I ADORED every bit of the Spiffy journey. You write romance splendidly and I got all tingly uncountable times. Thank you!! And hey, if you remember how you wanted to end this and feel like sharing a few words (or more) about it, I'd love to hear it all. :)

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 11 on November 08, 2019 06:50am

I loved that bit "aren't we going to fight?" The sexual tension has me all aquiver.

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 10 on November 08, 2019 06:33am

I love the way you wrote their fight

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 9 on November 08, 2019 06:19am

Oooh yeah,  i love a stubborn Joyce

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 8 on November 08, 2019 05:50am

Great first meeting for our dynamic duo

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 7 on November 08, 2019 05:37am

Interesting addition to the team. Great chapter 

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 6 on November 08, 2019 05:25am

Why do i get the  feeling the Watcher  is gonna intervene on Joyce moving?

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 5 on November 08, 2019 05:16am

Her death really would destroy him

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 4 on November 08, 2019 05:02am

Great chapter.  I look forward to reading on 

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 3 on November 08, 2019 04:53am

Interesting chapter. I can't wait for Spuffy to meet 

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 2 on November 08, 2019 04:38am

Poor Buffy. That all sounds awful for her

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Kittenshift17 commented on Chapter 1 on November 08, 2019 04:22am

Great opening chapter.  I can't wait to read more 

Xx-Kittenshift17 

 

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k1ngohats commented on Chapter 48 on September 04, 2019 12:41am Liked

Oh my god, I can't believe this ends here! Ive spent the last two days marathoning this fic, and it's absolutely in my top 5 fave spuffy fanfics now (next to West of the Moon East of the Sun and The Darkling) and god, even if this never gets updated again, at least it stopped after Spike revived.

This was one hell of a ride, and even though it's been near two years since this chapter came out, I'll keep waiting with bated breathe for the next.

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amidtheflowers commented on Chapter 48 on May 04, 2019 03:07pm Liked

I can’t tell you how many times I’ve read and reread this wonderful fic heart It is my absolute fave and has some of the most beautiful storytelling, character development, and romance I’ve ever read. I love it how it is here and I will love it if you ever add more. Just, thank you. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this fic heart

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The Disappearing Girl commented on Chapter 48 on November 19, 2018 01:01am

I really hope you will update again! Seeing the last update date gives me hope. The path for the rest of the story seems so clear, I hope you will Take us down it. I love this 

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Chloelilybet commented on Chapter 48 on September 02, 2018 09:18am Liked

I know it's been a while since you last did any writing for this story, but I'm curious as to whether you think you'll ever finish it.

This is my second time reading this fic and I really love your characterisations, you manage to write the characters we love in your own unique way without losing the soul of what makes them so loved in the first place. I'm also desperate to see Angels reaction to a Buffy and Spike who are ridiculously in love, especially when he's been living as Willows puppy for so long (no doubt they'll be some brooding about his being in Sunnydale, and enduring torture, for Buffy, and her ending up with Spike XD) plus the big reunion of course.

If you're not feeling this story anymore that's understandable, inspiration comes when it comes and strikes whichever fandom it pleases, just hoping it might strike here.

An avid fan

Chloelilybet

Author's Response on November 15, 2018 09:25am

Oh my goodness, thank you so much for your lovely comment :) 

Wil I ever finish this? Short answer: Yes. I plan to. I love working on this story and I feel like I can't leave it unfinished. Long answer: It's been a really eventful year and I've drifted away from this fic for so long (not to mention how long it's been since my last Buffy rewatch). I'll need to re-read it, refresh my memory, and edit the heck out of the rough draft of the next chapter that's been sitting on my computer for a year. I don't know when the update is coming, only that it will come (and hopefully soon). Thanks again! <3

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Scott100111 commented on Chapter 23 on July 29, 2018 04:27am Liked

Good work.

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Scott100111 commented on Chapter 21 on July 29, 2018 02:50am Liked

Your Buffy is great. Spike is finally getting better. The one complaint I have and this is pretty much a given for almost all btvs fics is the sex or the Spike getting hard this, Spike getting hard that, ffs I don't wanna read about that. You wanna write a sex scene or something go ahead, no complaints but it gets annoying when it's repeated over and over in most chapters. A couple times is all right but it really gets overdone. Other then that keep up the good work.

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Scott100111 commented on Chapter 12 on July 28, 2018 01:39am Liked

 I like it. Your Buffy characterization is great. Spike is alright I suppose. I like a bad ass/funny Spike but not an evil ones I suppose but who knows, he might change?

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jibrille commented on Chapter 48 on December 07, 2017 06:32pm Liked

It's such a fantastic Christmas present to see a new chapter of this story:-)

Author's Response on December 08, 2017 11:58am

Aww thank you! :)

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kimothyschma commented on Chapter 48 on December 05, 2017 09:17pm Liked

Woooo! Fantastic! applause

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:44pm

Aww thanks! :)

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 48 on December 05, 2017 01:23pm

 Buffy is planning her new start and hearing about Sunnydale made her decide where to go. One would think that Ms. Davies should know about other Hellmouths in the country, or maybe she lied? Anyway I liked hearing this side of Giles phonecall.

Now Spike is back but how will he find Buffy? At this point Ms. Davies knows so I suppose he will make her tell him.

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:43pm

Yep, Buffy's heading to Sunnydale. I always thought it was sort of funny in "The Wish" that Buffy's Cleveland Watcher didn't know about the Sunnydale Hellmouth *shrugs* kinda makes you wonder if she meant it or not. Thanks for the review!

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Coraxes commented on Chapter 48 on December 05, 2017 12:58pm Liked

I want to leave a really coherent review about how excited I am but all i can think is oh HELL yeah

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:42pm

Thanks so much! I'm excited to be back and posting again!

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TieDyeJackson commented on Chapter 48 on December 05, 2017 08:39am Liked

an AU of an AU , how Meta :P. Good to have you back to review :D

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:42pm

Lol, it's been a fun concept to work with. Thanks :)

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porn_girl commented on Chapter 48 on December 05, 2017 05:51am Liked

So so so happy for the update. I feel sad for Buffy but hopeful that Sunnydale will bring Buffy some peace. Well, as much peace as a hellmouth can.  

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:41pm

Aww thank you :) I'm so excited to start get the Sunnydale chapters all done and posted!

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Tosquitoes commented on Chapter 48 on December 05, 2017 12:47am

I have this really bad feeling that Buffy's going to die before Spike reaches her, as that what happens in the Wish. I'm so excited for any outcome though, and I'm glad you brought Spike back. That was an interesting twist!

Can Buffy's Watcher just...die already? I don't think I've ever hated a character as much as her before. Does that woman even have a soul?? (yes, I'm well aware of the irony of that comment haha)

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:40pm

Spike was always going to come back, but I feel sort of bad for leaving him dead for so long in RL time omg. Thanks so much for reading, the next chapter will be up ASAP!

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nepalichik commented on Chapter 48 on December 04, 2017 11:47pm Liked

squee

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:39pm

Thank you :)

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 48 on December 04, 2017 11:31pm Liked

Squee! squeeUpdate! Yes!! party

Buffy needs a hug. hug From Spike. How nice he only stayed gone long enough to make Buffy be like the canon Wishverse Buffy!

I like her acrobatic moves.

So much fun to hear the other side of Giles' phone call!

"—you." Oh my god.hearts I thought that "love" was just a British Spike way to start any old sentence. But no. heartheartheart

I look forward to what they'll do in Sunnydale! yaypopcorn *remembers canon Wishverse!Buffy dies in Sunnydale* scaredpopcorn

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:39pm

Indeed she does *hugs Buffy*. I plan to update ASAP. The Sunnydale chapters have begun!

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hcconn commented on Chapter 48 on December 04, 2017 11:21pm

I'm so happy to see you back! What a great chapter to see pop up on my bookshelf! I can't wait to read more! I'm definitely on the edge of my metaphorical seat!

Author's Response on December 06, 2017 06:38pm

Thank you :) I plan to have the story done and finished by the end of the year or early January at the latest. 

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