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Anektimitos commented on Baby's First Christmas on September 11, 2016 04:52pm Liked

Lovely trilogy

But I feel obliged to point out biological error here. It's not possible to have a second pregnancy so soon after the first. There's a period of 4-6 months after delivery, during which the mother produces milk and also REMAINS INFERTILE. It's nature's way of

1) Preventing too much strain on the mother's body

2) Making sure babies are spaced far enough apart to make childcare easier

 

Author's Response on September 11, 2016 05:21pm

Glad you liked it :)

I just looked this up, and: 

"Many women think that having a baby means that you are “immune” from getting pregnant for a few weeks or even months afterwards. However, this is actually not the case at all. Did you know that a woman can become pregnant as soon as two to three weeks after giving birth, even if she has not yet had a period? Some doctors say that the first few months following giving birth are one of the most fertile times for a woman. There are, however, a few different things that will determine just how fertile a woman is after giving birth.
If a woman is breastfeeding, generally speaking, it is highly unlikely that she will get pregnant. If a woman is solely breastfeeding, and her periods have not returned to normal yet, breastfeeding in and of itself can be around 98 percent effective as birth control."

For the purposes of this fic, assume Buffy didn't breastfeed for long. 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Epilogue: Entropy Monsters on August 11, 2015 06:31am Liked

A very sweet and fun trilogy. I enjoyed the little world they created for themselves. Wish we saw more details of their lives as the families grow/age, and the new adventures coming.

Author's Response on August 11, 2015 06:20am

Thanks for your review! 

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MsXGingerXNinja commented on Epilogue: Entropy Monsters on May 01, 2015 05:58pm Liked

Loved it! can't wait for the next story about Tina and Dawn it's going to be amazing <3

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AGriffinWriter commented on Epilogue: Entropy Monsters on December 29, 2014 01:29am

Nice wrap-up :) I laughed at 'Entropy Monster' hahaha!

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the_bronze commented on Epilogue: Entropy Monsters on December 27, 2014 09:48am Liked

Stopping at two 'eh Buffy? *smirks*

Man...it feels like the end of an era now. You HAVE to write a seperate story on the new generation of slayers!! 

Post series fics are so hard to end  since you almost convince yourself that they're canon. 

This was the first ever fic i started reading and i think it'll always be my favourite because this is how i imagined life after Sunnydale for them..

BRAVO!!CrySqueeBowFlowersApplause

Author's Response on December 27, 2014 07:53am

First rule of storytelling: always leave them wanting more ;) 

Thanks for sticking with the story, over all these months. Your reviews have been greatly appreciated. 

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magnus374 commented on Epilogue: Entropy Monsters on December 27, 2014 09:09am

I like the glimpses of their life we saw in the epilogue. It seems like everyone had good lifes, that's nice. 

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Mirandaann commented on Baby's First Christmas on December 10, 2014 08:41pm

Nice ending, looking forward to the epilogue 

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AGriffinWriter commented on Baby's First Christmas on December 08, 2014 11:00pm

Ha! "I've knocked your sister up again." - totally made up for the sad Serenity feels.

Very curious if their opposite prediction will turn out to be true.

Author's Response on December 08, 2014 09:03pm

Good! :) 

Time will tell. 

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magnus374 commented on Baby's First Christmas on December 07, 2014 06:46am

Some good news, maybe a bit soon, but still good news.

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the_bronze commented on Baby's First Christmas on December 06, 2014 04:21pm Liked

I'm surprised Buffy wasn't pregnant with Jay earlier considering she and Spike were at it like bunnies! Only now do the babies start to come along one after the other. Nice surprise though. Wasn't expecting it.

Beautiful story with a beautiful ending. *jumps for joy for the epilogue*

Author's Response on December 06, 2014 02:24pm

SqueeYour review has me grinning like a mad thing. Thank you! I've had a lot of fun writing this - making my favorite couple happy. 

the_bronze Replied on December 06, 2014 03:26pm

I've enjoyed the journey too. After The End was the first ever fic I started reading and the trilogy remains my favourite set of stories to date. I got a lot of inspiration for my post series trilogy from you which I'm grateful for :)

They do deserve a happy ending 

Author's Response on December 06, 2014 03:30pm

*blushes* 

Oh, you've made my day! 

the_bronze Replied on December 06, 2014 03:57pm

You've made mine! I don't think I would've started writing if I hadn't seen you on fanfiction.net. I'm so glad I did! I'm sure everyone knows what I mean when I say that writing gives you a feeling of satisfaction and pride that you don't get with other things.

Author's Response on December 06, 2014 04:00pm

:) 

I'm gonna go check out your fics...  

the_bronze Replied on December 06, 2014 04:05pm

*hides behind pillow*

I wouldn't begin to compare them to yours xD

Author's Response on December 06, 2014 04:15pm

Ssshhh! I'm sure they're great! 

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magnus374 commented on Never A Normal Day on November 23, 2014 02:12pm

Willow and Xander should have preparied Catlin before Willow said anything, sometimes they don't think enough. Buffy and Spike are used to strange things, I do think they were to calm to what Jay did though.

Author's Response on November 23, 2014 02:43pm

They were so calm it worried them lol 

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AGriffinWriter commented on Never A Normal Day on November 23, 2014 01:23pm

There are certainly some plot twists. Willow wasn't very sensitive with her timing. *sigh* I can never decide if I want them to end up together in post-series verses. But anyone's better than Kennedy.

Ooh a wedding in England! Good for Giles. He lost Jenny and Joyce, and now that Olivia's grown a backbone in this verse, I think Giles is due some married merriment.

Hmmm... floating baby. More research!

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the_bronze commented on Never A Normal Day on November 23, 2014 07:21am Liked

I'm surprised Spike and Buffy reacted so calmly about Jay levitating :')

Willow may have wanted to explain the full story to Caitlin in private first before announcing it to everyone. She should've been one of the first to know.

I noticed a couple of typos I think(forgive me if they are right and I've just read the sentence wrong) that made quite a difference to the sentence.

"I think you’re due a snog,” Is this meant to be to Spike? Or 'song' to Jay?

"they both watched Jay levitate above its crib." Should its be 'his'?

Let us fetch you the 'Queen of Plot Twists' crown ;)

Author's Response on November 23, 2014 05:31am

They reacted that way instinctively, not logicaly :) 

Feel free to point out typos to me any time you find them. You're correct with the second one - it should indeed be his crib. The first one, though, is said to Spike, in reference to Giles comment in the previous chapter. 

Author's Response on November 23, 2014 05:33am

“If I’m wrong I will snog your husband,” he stated.

the_bronze Replied on November 23, 2014 05:43am

Oh I remember now :)

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jjj commented on Destiny Free on November 17, 2014 03:53am

Nice fic (and Triliogy). Lots of interesting plot turns. It's good to see things working out for Spike & Buffy (with a few bumps in the road). I'll be waiting on the last 2 chapters.

It's also great to find new Spuffy fiction. Thanks

Author's Response on November 17, 2014 01:26pm

Thank you for your lovely review! 

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ginar369 commented on Destiny Free on November 12, 2014 02:05am Liked

Its the hell mouth. Nothing is that simple!

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magnus374 commented on Destiny Free on November 09, 2014 06:54am

No badness just good news, nice.

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the_bronze commented on Destiny Free on November 09, 2014 05:39am Liked

Only 2 more?! It's gonna be so weird not looking out for an update on this sorry... :( 

It seems like generally there will be a happy ending but I'm sure you'll throw a twist into the mix before hand. (Does it count as second guessing this time since you asked us?) ;)

Author's Response on November 09, 2014 09:44am

Aww, it'll be okay. Plenty more stories on the way from me to keep up with instead. 

*glances at my spoiler folder and grins* 

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AGriffinWriter commented on Destiny Free on November 09, 2014 12:28am

Ooh, that sinister question mark at the end of your chapter notes. Tsk tsk tsk.

Otherwise, delightful, haha!

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the_bronze commented on Birth Day on November 02, 2014 10:49am

Oh no. Here come the prophecies. We can tell that this won't be plain sailing. I have a feeling that the slayers have something to do with it..

It's a boy! What a nice surprise!

Author's Response on November 02, 2014 08:54am

Tut tut, should know better than to second guess me! lol

the_bronze Replied on November 02, 2014 04:39pm

True. I've learnt that the hard way before. I can't help but blurt out predictions. Is a sign of me enjoying the story however which is a plus :)

Author's Response on November 02, 2014 04:54pm

*grins* 

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badgervamp commented on Birth Day on October 31, 2014 11:19pm Liked

Yay, a cute little .... boy!  Hmm, what can this mean?  And I love the brunette curls and ensuing discussion :)

Author's Response on October 31, 2014 08:20pm

Haha! Your review made me smile. Thank you :) 

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magnus374 commented on Birth Day on October 30, 2014 11:07am

Nice how everyone was surprised that it was a boy, a good moment.

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AGriffinWriter commented on Birth Day on October 30, 2014 02:35am Liked

So cute! And quite the twist. You had me fooled for sure, but Jay is a cute name and can still honor Joyce.

As for the ending... well done, my cliffhanger padawan, well done.

Author's Response on October 29, 2014 11:36pm

*grins* 

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badgervamp commented on Halloween Night on October 27, 2014 07:30am Liked

Love this chapter, especially the old tried and true method for starting labour - not that it worked for me no matter how many times we tried, and the surprise 'twin'. Lol!  Actually i'm about to dive in and start work on my 'delivery' chapter for New Day and there are a couple of elements in your chapter that i was going to work into mine.  Seeing as I'm such a slow writer, I'm sure noone will read them close enough together to notice the similarities.  Thanks for the great work Ellie.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response on October 27, 2014 07:40am

lol, thanks :)

Great minds think alike, eh? I'm sure no one will notice any similarities. So looking forward to your update!

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magnus374 commented on Halloween Night on October 23, 2014 05:53am

Buffy had her wish, the baby wasn't born on Halloween.

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the_bronze commented on Halloween Night on October 23, 2014 04:35am Liked

We always knew bondage was gonna come back to bite them eventually!Laughing

Great reaction from Buffy during the birth. Something I think we all expected from her. Luckily, Buffy was one of the mum's to have a relatively short labour period! Can't wait to see how both if them react to parenthood!

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AGriffinWriter commented on Halloween Night on October 23, 2014 03:29am Liked

The whole first scene made me laugh so much.

So she's a NaNoWriMo baby instead of a Halloween baby. ;-) Congrats on the nominations, luv!

Author's Response on October 23, 2014 06:41am

lol thank you

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magnus374 commented on Count Down on September 16, 2014 09:55am

Domestic and normal life. Well, their kind of normal.

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AGriffinWriter commented on Count Down on September 15, 2014 11:03pm

Great, Buffy, great. You've now jinxed yourself, Hellmouth-style. On the up-side, I'm sure some splendid people have their birthday on Halloween...

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