brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story. I hope that Buffy and Spike can defeat illyria
Thank you so much for your kind words! There are two more sequel stories to All I Ask if you look on my "Series" section :D xx
Just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed reading some of your other works - It's nice to have this start out with Spike heading out to reunite with Buffy as the starting point - it's a nice change from a lot of the other stories.
Thank you! I'd actually never thought about it like that before. I hope you enjoy the rest of the trilogy. I have mixed feelings about it. I love it but I always find things I would've done differently. I guess it's like that with your first attempts since this was my first proper full length story I published.
Terrific story, I'll be reading the sequel next. Great characterizations and a stunner of a cliffhanger. Awesome writing!
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've had so much fun writing it and I think you'll enjoy the sequel :)
I've noticed that sequels never seem to get the same amount of readers as the first in a series, no matter what they are. Have no idea why.
Neither do I. Maybe they haven't been notified? :
Hope your migraines have stopped? :-/
Not sure how wise Spike's decision is, but I guess we'll see.
All your reviews have had me smiling silly! Thank you so much for all your lovely feedback!
Unfortunately not. Painkillers don't seem to be stopping them either so doctors feel that it may be something else. They're not nas frequent though :)
Glad they've brightened your day :) No problem at all.
Know how you feel. I'm in pain all the freaking time and the doctors can't seem to figure out why. Then again, they don't seem to be trying too hard *sigh*
I'm so lucky to have a kind and hard working GP. I know some people that don't and have to press and press them to do something about the problem :(
This chapter has a good mix of light and heavier moments. Spike's line about Xander had me laughing out loud again.
Typo alert: Think you meant "Willow was NOW frantically waving." And "began to WALK towards the witch."
Oh. OH! Yay, Dawn! :D
Thank you for letting me know ;)
It's nice that Spike and Buffy could get some much-needed rest.
I think you meant Willow stood in the corridor and 'pouted' a little. Not 'poured' lol
*looks on shamefully* I should've got a beta sooner. Its amazing what you miss that a proof reader picks up on.
Don't be ashamed of mistakes. They happen, to all of us.
I'm really fussy, and read through my chapters about ten times before posting, but even then there's always like one or two typos.
It's always easier for someone who hasn't written the piece to point them out.
Hang on a sec. Didn't you put a warning about a character death in the last chapter? Nobody has died, unless I'm missing something... Please tell me Dawn doesn't die! That would definitely be a major thing, if it's true. *shakes head* You said it could be major or minor. I must be missing something. *clicks next chapter* (see what I mean, about you having me hooked?)
At the time I thought a coma could be considered as a character death for some people.
Regarding Dawn's fate..well you'll just have to read on I'm afraid :')
Ahhh, I see!
Aww, this was sweet. Nice chapter :)
I hope you don't mind me saying, but some of your punctuation is a little off. Commas should be inside quotation marks, not after them. And if a quote ends with an exclamation or question mark then a full stop or comma's not necessary. Not a big deal, but maybe something to watch out for in future. (Let me know if you don't find these comments helpful, and I'll shut up. I'm just trying to help you get better. But you're already very good.)
No I don't mind at all! :) as far as I know, I get my grammar sorted out in the later chapters since I didn't have a beta at this point. Thank you for pointing out :)
Fair enough :)