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deepbluejoy commented on 'Future Girl' on April 25, 2017 11:20am

 please fix text so the chapter is visible on all backgrounds. 

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acekoomboom commented on Allies Part One on January 06, 2015 06:37pm

Oh, like. Update, please! I am liking this very much, eeeeeep!

Squee

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acekoomboom commented on No More Spark Notes on January 06, 2015 06:22pm

SHE'S GAY?!?!?!? Hahahahahaha! Oh, Willow. And I loved her going off on Xan.

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acekoomboom commented on Dear Lord, Huh, and I Second Huh... on January 06, 2015 05:41pm

Laughing

Oh my gosh, that was SOOOOOOO funny, I really laughed out loud. The way that Buffy and William were so 'whatever, yeah' about it was so great and freaked the Sco obies out even more. I love that, and it seems to be a trend with your writing. Right on! A few spelling and punctuation errors, but none what-so-ever in plot! :)

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acekoomboom commented on 'Future Girl' on January 06, 2015 05:29pm

Oh no, poor Spike. It's gonna be okay! Don't fear!!!

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acekoomboom commented on One Hell of a Night on January 06, 2015 05:15pm

Aw, yay for Dru! Big Grin

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acekoomboom commented on Angel on January 06, 2015 04:55pm

His daughter, awwww! And yes, I will review, only 'cuz you asked so nicely. Wink

I love this, and what he said at the wake, yes!!! I like how well Angel is taking this, and I already know that the Scoobies will be way worse off! Wonder how you, peronally, will depict that... ?

Read

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acekoomboom commented on The End of a Beginning on January 06, 2015 04:40pm

I loved all the quotes, they fit so well where you put them. And Spike and Buffy still being in perfect sex form and going at it like bunnies all of the time, totally digging it. I liked that Spike is so happy at that and that they brought the kids with them. Loving this 'world has ended and now people are being sent back to fix it' thing, I think it may be my new fav. The people weren't just plopped back into their own bodies from the past (which is only good when done right, but I like this kind more.) and they brought people's children so that the Scoobies will REALLY freak. Hyped for the next chappie!

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Naenae000 commented on The End of a Beginning on June 01, 2014 01:52am

Keep up the good work. 

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RayJen commented on The End of a Beginning on March 15, 2014 05:47pm

Really enjoying this so far.  Can't wait for an update

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magnus374 commented on Allies Part One on February 04, 2014 02:13pm

They are collecting a good team it seems, but when you think about the people they are contacting, then it doesn't make any sense to not contact the council.

Author's Response on February 04, 2014 10:38pm

Without giving too much away you will have to continue reading we all know how Buffy can be, how she needs to be talked into a lot of things. Cryptic I know. And thank you a lot for all the tips you have given me!

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All4Spike commented on No More Spark Notes on January 11, 2014 08:44pm Liked

Just found this story and read all through so far. Love it! Totally understandable that Buffy et al would have recruited more fighters over the years so the OCs are believable. Love that you've cured poor Dru's insanity. Awesome that you've woven in some Tolkienish elements.

Looking forward to PastBuffy & PastSpike coming to terms with the fact they are destined to be together...

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Spikeswp commented on Angel on January 11, 2014 12:38pm Liked

I'm liking this story. keep up the good work!

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magnus374 commented on No More Spark Notes on January 11, 2014 08:37am

A lot of information was given here, but telling them that Willow is gay was not a good thing. That's private information and something she should have been allowed to find out for herself.

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magnus374 commented on 'Future Girl' on January 08, 2014 01:30pm

Past Spike doesn't seem hard to convince. A very awkward situation for poor William. If their future is gone, will they cease to exist or stay to live in the past? Well, we will see.

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SpuffyFan4EVA163 commented on The End of a Beginning on January 08, 2014 07:42am

Great News! My friend IRL is an English major and has offered to edit this for me. When I post the next chapter, I am going to also post updated versions of the previous ones for anyone who wants to reread or anyone new. Chapters posted from now on will also be mostly clean and fluent.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT, IT KEEPS ME GOING!!!Wink

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Havena commented on 'Future Girl' on January 07, 2014 11:10pm Liked

Good job with young Spike.  His reaction was just how I would see it happening.  Poor Will, having to pick up his mother.  I'd like to be a fly on the wall to see how their dinner went.

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ginar369 commented on 'Future Girl' on January 07, 2014 09:15pm Liked

He just had to push didn't he? Well at least present Spike knows they are for real.

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magnus374 commented on One Hell of a Night on January 07, 2014 01:28pm

They are not afraid of changeing things then, for this wilo change almost everything. I have a soft spot for Drusilla, so I'm glad that things seems to get good for her. Thane seems like a character I can like.

Author's Response on January 07, 2014 07:22pm

I love Dru as well. and as for changing everything...It couldn't get worse than it already was—they knew this(Chapter One). Pretty much the future is gone--as in nothing left. Thank you for your support!!!Big Grin

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magnus374 commented on Angel on January 06, 2014 09:03am

Seems to be a nice Angel in this story.

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ginar369 commented on Angel on January 06, 2014 08:57am Liked

That was a good way of giving us Alana's backstory. The Spike of this time might not want to believe it but for teh same reasons Angel was easy to convince Spike should be too. He can probably smell the family connection. He'll see the mating claim too. Buffy, Giles and Xander of this time will be the hardest to convince. Giles will accept it easily enough once they provide some proof. Buffy won't believe that anything could come between her and Angel. And Xander? Well his Buffy crush won't let him be very nice I don't think.

Author's Response on January 06, 2014 06:07pm

Yeah I was gonna make it very hard to convince everyone but if I did that I'd be looking at an extra and uneeded like 8 chapters. And the chapters are going to be getting meetier so I am tring to make those who are easy to convince well, easy to canvince.(lol) But Xander and Bufy are gonna be the hardest by far. If I tried to drag out the telling part we'd be talking 150,000-200,000 words The main lot is going to be witty and drawn out so the back story I am trying to wrap up by chapter 10-11.

And thank you for reading!!!

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Havena commented on One Hell of a Night on January 06, 2014 02:46am Liked

I like Thane.  He's down to earth. Looking forward to the meetings with the dual Buffys and Spikes.

Author's Response on January 06, 2014 06:16pm

Thanks, I was a little iffy on adding an OC who I created when I was like seven. Not to mention an OC who is important to the story. Elvish is another thing I almost didn't do. Tolkien was a GOD. I also made Dru sane so early on mainly because I was starting to think like her.(LOL) The small section were she is still insane to me almost 4 hours to write. FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART I HAIL ALL WHO CAN WRITE DRUSILLA.

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ginar369 commented on The End of a Beginning on January 05, 2014 01:39pm Liked

I'm in. It sounds interesting. If it really is before 1999 they are going to have some stuff to deal with. Angel is hanging around mooning after Buffy. Joyce is clueless. Willow can't float a pencil. They are going to have a hell of a time explaining everthing that's for sure!

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BillieBob commented on The End of a Beginning on January 05, 2014 09:10am Liked

brilliant beginning - cant wait to read more

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SpuffyFan4EVA163 commented on The End of a Beginning on January 04, 2014 09:22pm

Thank you all. I havent even posted the other four chapters yet and you like it. I am pleased!!!

magnus374: Thank you for the tip of not posting all at once. I think what I actually meant was that I plan on writting it all out before anything else goes up. But maby I will just update weekly. I began writting yesterday afternoon and I can't stop. I have everything brainstormed and outlined in my notebook so it shouldn't be as hard to update regularly. I am going to put the next three chapters up now and should be putting up a chapter or two a week. THANK YOU!!!

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hobbituk commented on The End of a Beginning on January 04, 2014 06:31pm

I like the premise very much.  You did say it was unbeta'd and you do have a couple of typos  - it's Cheshire Cat (from Alice in Wonderland) and there was a here instead of hear.

Looking forward to the rest.  

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cjwash1160 commented on The End of a Beginning on January 04, 2014 03:27pm Liked

Im hooked already interesting and very well written more please

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Havena commented on The End of a Beginning on January 04, 2014 02:08pm Liked

A long story and time-travel to boot.  I'm in heaven.  You grabbed me with your opening right away and I am eagerly looking forward to more.

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magnus374 commented on The End of a Beginning on January 04, 2014 12:51pm

This has a lot of potential. A time travel story can often be good, and this has an interesting setting. So they need to change something, but they also has to worry about what shouldn't change. There's much for them to think about

If the story will be very long, I would prefer if it didn't get posted all at once, you also tends to get more reviews that way.

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