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SusanMarieR commented on Eternally Present on June 16, 2020 10:08pm

Was hoping for more but understand if the Muse has left.

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Kittenshift17 commented on Pray the Lord My Soul to Take on September 08, 2019 10:27am

This was a fabulous chapter. Thanks for writing it. 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Eternally Present on September 08, 2019 09:23am

Interesting opening chapter. I look forward to reading on.

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Versheenah commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on November 13, 2018 01:33pm Liked

This is an interesting twist on time travel. I love it that Spike's as old as Angel now and takes no crap from him!

Also thank you so much for Spike having no soul!! I love love love that it doesn't really matter! And him thinking that he was less of an action person with the soul than he is without was very satisfying to read.

Buffy hasn't had much screen time so far but I'm sure we're at the point when she becomes a regular and I'm so looking forward to this!!

I'm curious how the story continues! Hope you do come back to it some day!

Thank you!

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subchan commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on November 12, 2018 05:50pm Liked

i really like the story so far, but its not fair to suddenly leave it hanging when things are picking up speed! lol. and laughing at what? Does Dru have Angel tied and dressed up? lol.

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pfeifferpack commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on October 15, 2018 03:19am

Re-read this because I remembered how much I was loving this story. I have 3 WIPs that have lingered for a couple of years or so so there is no way I'd complain or try to shame anyone...I know how it happens. Still one day I truly hope your muse encourages you to complete this wonderful fic. It is a pleasure to read even incomplete but I'd love to see where you were taking us.

Thanks for giving us this much in any event.


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Darknight commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on August 27, 2018 03:30am Liked

This is a very enjoyable story. I especially love what you have done with Spike.

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Alagose commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on March 20, 2018 05:57pm Liked

Okay, you officially can NOT leave this story on such a cliffhanger! Epic premise, love the changes! More please, and SOON! biggrin

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violet_tailyeour commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on February 10, 2018 03:23am Liked

This is a great story and I'm sad that it might never be finished. I love the world you've created and the way you weave the story. maybe someday you will finish it. 

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gabelou1991 commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on October 16, 2017 10:10am

J'aime j'adore les fics voyagent deans le temps.

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Joyce commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on March 22, 2017 10:19am Liked

 That was a bit of shock going from kissing Buffy to the spider woman. At first it seemed like she was in Buffy’s house. There should be a bit of separation there or something to distinguish the change of scenery.  

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SPolina commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on March 07, 2017 02:34pm

I know it's been a long time since you wrote this story, but I think it's brilliant and I really hope you would come back to it :)

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pfeifferpack commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on December 31, 2016 04:12am Liked

OH I so want to know what he walked in on!

Love how Reptile Boy went in this verse.  Liked Callie, brave and practical girl there.  Cordy was a hoot. Loved that he couldn't put a name to her but did snap to the cheerleader personae.

I really, really loved what Spike said to Giles in Buffy's defense.  Glad this Giles is willing to listen, consider and learn.  It seems that he also has accepted to a degree at least that Spike IS an ally.  This is a really good thing!  Maybe by making these sorts of changes he'll be helping Buffy as much as the big saving of her life helps.

I am delighted Spike told Buffy at least the bare bones about where he came from.  She seems not to be that hung up on the soul issue but is judging him by how he chooses to act and that's a great improvement.  I loved him telling a jealous Buffy that she was his "one woman" for a hundred years and would probably be for longer than that (as in forever).   She appears to be happy with that thought.  I think having him tell her his story and how he feels about her (added to the things he has done that shows the truth of it) are massively romantic gestures that will blow Angel out of the running.  To young Buffy she's just had the ultimate in romantic heroes presented to her and even the "mysterious" Angel can't hope to compete....YAY!!

So he's leveled with her about how his memory has problems.  Good thing!  He needs to keep that journal close that he jotted things  down in early on.

Willow is also in his corner and Xander is not obnoxious or hateful.  

I like that he's having a coat made to protect from fire.

Always love having Dalton show up.

So very good!  Long for more.



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pfeifferpack commented on Patience Is Bitter on December 31, 2016 03:39am Liked

Dru is more lucid AND seems to have accepted that Spike belongs to Buffy.  The reference to Buffy as "his Sunshine" seems to indicate she does know and appears okay with it.

Time only moves in one direction, and is quite upset to have all it’s hard work undone, That's ominous considering he's back to change all the bad stuff.  Sounds like some things will almost happen in different ways such as Buffy's death.  Love the reference to snake being later (Mayor?) and this is a serpent (Reptile Boy).

Love the visual of Buffy staking the tree.  *giggle*.  Yeah, she should have noticed Angel and Spike nearby.  Good point Spike.  Loved this:  “You always did fancy them young and inexperienced.” The Angel in his apocalyptic future had seemingly grown out of his affection for the older Buffy and her behavior as a General.  Yes that fits.  Buffy sucking on a lolly at only 14 was what get Angel's attention in a big way.  He really didn't care much for her "attitude" once she matured.  He didn't KNOW her much less love her, not for who she was in truth...not once she stopped being the dewy eyed teen.

YAY I love how proactive Spike is being in dealing with these events in Buffy's life.


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pfeifferpack commented on Halargian World on December 31, 2016 02:58am Liked

Well lots of interesting reveals in this chapter.  

He does not have his soul (but he has the conditioning...maybe he DOES have it but doesn't realize it...hum).  Demon blood makes him almost feral depending on the demon I'd bet...a Fyral is not too much with the thinking.  The other demon blood feasts gave him big buzz and power but his brain still worked on a high level.  Human blood sort of acts like Benedryl to an allergic reaction regarding the demon blood.  It stabilizes as he put it.

I like his encounters with Xander, Willow and Buffy.  I think they have seen that he had control enough that he didn't attack them even though clearly out of his mind.  That has to go a long way towards a start of trust building.  I'm glad he said what he did to Willow.  Good info for the group.  Glad he started to explain a bit to Buffy.  She knows he's been somewhere and lived longer than the Watchers books indicate.  He called it realm (loved her D&D quip) so she is probably thinking demon dimension.  They are going to want to know more, especially Giles I'd bet.

Good job with crazed Dru in mid vision.  She knows but also doesn't.  Probably a good thing she's not full strength.  I am delighted that he feels little for her.  He knows she manipulates him and does not love him and that's very, very good.

YAY to him taking out the Annoying One and his minions.

Enjoyed the chapter...nothing for you to be unhappy about IMHO.


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pfeifferpack commented on Three Hours Too Soon on December 31, 2016 02:24am Liked

What a brilliant chapter!  I love it all being Spike's POV so very much.  Excellent choice on your part.

Chuckled at the mention of Firound demons (Dreamweaver has made so many types of demons head-canon to me).  Felt like seeing mention of an old friend.

Love all the interactions.  Giles is likely flummoxed at the encounter.  Back in S2 and before the unleashing of Angelus Giles would have been more willing to learn truth from seeing Spike than later. He bought into Council teaching but was less stiff rumped about it back then.  Seeing a vampire like Spike, maybe learning that Spike had gone to fight for his soul (meaning the demon wanted the soul for the love of Buffy), things of that nature would make Giles question those flawed beliefs.

LOVE the shopping trip.  Had to laugh with Spike over the literal white hat.  I'm glad he opted to buy it. I loved his advice to the shopgirl who reminded him a bit of Dawn.   So sad that they never regained the relationship lost in canon in his previous future life.  Maybe this go round they can stay close.

Loved his encounter with Joyce.  I hope they bond strongly even more than in canon.  Love the idea of him wanting that painting and his plans to get a job if only to kill time.

Really enjoy his decision not to let any of the bad happen this go Scooby death, no Giles death or Joyce death.  He's going to do more than save Buffy and help prevent the horrible world that came in his last future.  He actually seems fond of them even though they weren't too nice to him in the previous go.  Maybe this time they can have a better relationship.

Love him confronting Angel.  I hope he tells Angel some of it such as his coming from a future time (and proving it in some way).  Maybe he can get Angel to back off from Buffy or even get his cursed soul anchored.  I hope he does let Angel know he has a soul of his own that he fought for.  I don't want Angel working against him or turning the others against him for that matter.

Spike is going to have to decide what to do about Dru before too long.  She's dangerous.  It would be great if he could get Angel to take over her care and get her out of town!

I love him thinking of saving even Wes, Charles and Fred too.  Nice tip of the hat to Angel S5 and their relationships.

Just a picture perfect chapter.


I know this hasn't been completed or updated in years but I am going to read all that you have posted and live in hope that one day you'll return to it and complete it.  This is one of those unfinished fic's that BEG to be completed but are worthy of reading even incomplete.

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pfeifferpack commented on Pray the Lord My Soul to Take on December 31, 2016 01:30am Liked

I wonder if Buffy did snap to those amber eyes and what they meant.  

I love that she's interested.  Maybe he'll keep her from the disaster of her relationship with Angel.  That alone will improve her life and attitude.

Loving this.  So well written too. Can't understand how I've not read it before.


edited...I did read the first few chapters before and lost track.  I really, REALLY, enjoyed the re-read.  As I say in another comment later it is so worth reading even incomplete but I would be overjoyed if your muse kickstarts and you complete this sometime.  This is SO BLOODY WELL WRITTEN and the plot is wonderfully done.  This is going in my favorites file on the HD as well as here even as is.

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pfeifferpack commented on Eternally Present on December 31, 2016 12:30am Liked

I LOVE this opener.  What a compelling start to a time travel fic.

So there's really nothing but demonic, pure demonic, even in the animal kingdom.  Must be a terrible place and yet another reason for Spike to want out of there.

The old demon/witch is creepy and well written. I wonder what her plans are for Spike's blood (it may not even matter in the story anyway but it is something to contemplate).  She said she wouldn't use it against him so that's a good thing at least.


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Spuffy4ever91 commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on November 25, 2016 02:13am

Love the way you write Spike! Keep going! I know it's been a couple of years but I would still love to know what happens! 😊😊😊

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2Shay commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on October 16, 2016 11:32am Liked

I adore this story. I liked that it's being told from Spike's point of view only. His emotions ring true in his self-confident yet hesitant presence in this time. He's self-aware enough to know to take his time about things and to be truthful. 

I am going to keep this story on my bookshelf in the hopes that one day you'll update. Take Care!

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SheriJ commented on Eternally Present on July 14, 2016 12:49am

I hope you return to this one, I like it a lot.

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Naenae000 commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on December 31, 2015 10:33pm

Please continue. Very good read.

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Gaia-VoidMother commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on December 11, 2015 05:26pm Liked

I do hope this will be picked up again at some stage. It'd be a right pity to see this totally abandoned.  I enjoyed what there was of it thoroughly

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Patience Is Bitter on November 18, 2015 06:03pm Liked

Favorite part: description of Spike's slow swagger out of the bar. Yup, that is the Spike we know and love. ^^

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Pray the Lord My Soul to Take on November 18, 2015 03:37am Liked


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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Eternally Present on November 18, 2015 03:02am Liked

Woooo, this is looking so interesting!! :))

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broddie commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on October 03, 2015 11:10am

Im loving this!!

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ladypeyton commented on Eternally Present on April 08, 2015 01:47pm

Still look in on this story in hopes that an update has slipped in under my notice. Still live in hope that you will update.

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Cewcew commented on A Big Bad's Big Bad Heart on January 22, 2015 07:03pm Liked

Well, I have been enjoying this. A little sad. I was looking for completed story's... And this one is not... And not updated in over a year. It is a shame.. As I've said 'I have beem enjoying is.

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Havena commented on Eternally Present on November 24, 2014 07:20am

Was really impressed with this story and am so sad to see it fall by the wayside.  Any chance at all that we can expect it to be finished?

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