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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twenty-Four on February 06, 2018 05:16pm

Again we could see Anya saying some very good things to Xander, hopefully he will think about it. Another who should think about it is Giles. He will need to think about what Spike said.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twenty-Three on February 06, 2018 05:10pm

 Giles strong reaction was of course sad for Buffy. I can understand him not being happy but he shouldn't have said that. Xander doesn't get the situation in the end he will probably come around and Willlow of course will. As expected Tara and Anya was supportive, I loved the things Anya said. Also nice that they found the ring.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twenty-Two on February 06, 2018 01:44pm

 Of course Joyce wouldn't be overjoyed with the news, she had some worries but in the end she accepts it, Dawn of course liked it.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twenty-One on February 06, 2018 12:13pm

Good, Buffy said what she wanted and was showing that she wants to be his, what more could we ask for

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twenty on February 06, 2018 11:48am

I liked the scene with Buffy and Joyce, it did feel like such a mother-daughter thing. Joyce may not like the idea of her daughter being with a vampire but she gave some good advice anyway.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Nineteen on February 06, 2018 08:01am

Buffy is really stuck on the idea that the soul is needed to feel love nut it seems like Spike got her to start thinking.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Eighteen on February 06, 2018 07:53am

I just love how Dawn is trying to "help". Poor Spike,he tried but it didn't work out like he hoped. It's sad for Buffy too, being stuck in this mindset.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Seventeen on February 05, 2018 05:27pm

I like how Dawn is thinking, her worries about her existence causing trouble seems real. Also good to see how she wants to help Spike and Buffy.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Sixteen on February 05, 2018 05:21pm

The sadness is flowing through this chapter. Buffy can't belive that the feelings were real and Spike was sad since Buffy run from him. Then he got drunk and when Buffy (after some talk with Dawn) actually wanted to talk, he expected something bad and lashed out. They both have a lot of issues.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Fifteen on February 04, 2018 11:45am

 Xander and Jenkins to the rescue, that was goid to see and I liked what they did with Riley. Then we had a wedding with a drunk Giles and even Larry had a role in the story. A very sweet moment.

Now that the story has ended, Buffy has to deal with the real world. All this is of course a lot to take in, so I can't blame her for running. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Fourteen on February 04, 2018 10:35am

Good of Elisabeth to fight Angelus, she probably got a bit of help from Buffy being in her mind. No surprise that Willow's spell didn't work, but at least nothing bad happened.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Thirteen on February 04, 2018 07:00am

I do enjoy the plot of this romance novel and how it affects Buffy and Spike. It all seems very fitting. 

Willow seems to have a plan to get them out but I'm sure something will go wrong with that.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twelve on February 04, 2018 06:53am

Buffy has gotten used to this situation on the island and the time when she's Elisabeth, they are blending in some way. During the time here they have built a life and a routine. It was sweet how William read poetry for Elisabeth.

Now they are in danger though, both Angelus and Riley.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Eleven on February 04, 2018 06:45am

Buffy is having her typical conflicting thoughts here. She wants Spike but she "know" that she shouldn't want him. The little conversation between Elisabeth and William does mirror the situation for Buffy and Spike.

Another nice little glimpse from the world outside the book.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Ten on February 03, 2018 08:27am

And here we got to the romantic novel sex, both as their characters and as themself.

A wonderful Anyamoment here too.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Nine on February 03, 2018 08:20am

Living in a piece of fiction do have some perks, just like Buffy is thinking here. Things are developing between here and Spike but understandable they are worried about how much is real. 

Anya is the right choice for reading the book, she won't have any problem with the things that are happening.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Eight on February 03, 2018 08:13am

As we can see they are following the plot and sometimes lose control to it.

Good to see that Giles finally listened to Anya now they at least knows what happened. Anya's view is always enjoyable.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Seven on February 03, 2018 08:05am

I like how they at times are their book characters but then they remember who they are. Also nice that we even got some heaving boobs😀

Then we have the classic "Anya knows something but no one listen" moment.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Six on February 02, 2018 06:53pm

Angelus works well as the villain of the romance novel. Out in the real world it's still not known where they are. Anya brings some amusement but she isn't wrong about what she's saying.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Five on February 01, 2018 01:48pm

 Buffy and Spike is getting affected by being in the book, the way they talk are changing. Now we have the extra problem of Angelus being here.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Four on February 01, 2018 01:42pm

Spike can say some bad things but we can see that he's ready to make Buffy feel better. It does work, she is feeling better.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Three on February 01, 2018 01:17pm

This is so entertaining, the interaction is wonderful and amusing, this whole scenario is great. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Two on February 01, 2018 12:00pm

Of course Buffy would hate not having her powers and being the damsel in distress. Spike is of course happy being a pirate captain without the chip. He wants to play a bit but is ready to help Buffy when he understand how worried Buffy is for what is happening in Sunnydale. Also nice to see how the book has used their memories of other characters.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter One on January 31, 2018 01:15pm

This is such a wonderful beginning. Of course Spike arrived when Buffy was reading a cheesy romance novel and of course he would tease her because of it. Them being trapped in the book has a lot of good potential.

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jadeunicorn commented on Chapter Twenty-Seven on October 18, 2017 12:10pm Liked

love love this story!!! thank you so much for a great story to read!

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter Twenty-Seven on October 18, 2017 05:08am Liked

shacking up with Evil Dead over there She really shouldn't let him get away with any part of that phrase. They are married not shacking up and he shouldn't be permitted to call her husband names intended to demean him. He doesn't have to like it or like Spike but respectful behavior towards both Buffy and Spike should be a given.

Much as I want to smack her friends and Watcher (save Anya and Tara) I have to say it's more in character that they act this way. Well there's hope for the future at least. I want to believe that Buffy will always take Spike's side and they can come along or not as they choose.

Perfect place for the honeymoon. Lovely. I really needed this story today. RL has been a bear and I needed this sort of fantasy with a HEA. Thanks for giving me a lifeline to sanity when I needed it.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter Twenty-Six on October 18, 2017 04:59am Liked

Tara said all the right things bless her. Willow doesn't necessarily agree but fears losing Tara. SO arrogant!

He's not good for Buffy. Not like Riley was. I always felt that Xander was living vicariously through Riley. How he could STILL be thinking Riley was good for Buffy (or just good in any sense) pisses me off to no end.

Giles is a jerk but not an idiot apparently. 

Kathleen

 

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter Twenty-Five on October 18, 2017 04:50am Liked

"Losing Spike would destroy me. If you really want to do that to me, then you're not my friends anyway." Exactly! Assholes.

Buffy called it where Xander is concerned. What about Anya? Yeah he wants Anya AND the idea that he could have Buffy too. Sick jealous arse.

Awww she didn't MAKE a good man out of him but she certainly drew his inner good man out (in canon and in this story).

Kathleen

 

 

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter Twenty-Four on October 18, 2017 04:40am Liked

You don't want to hear a lot of things. But that doesn't make them any less real. Oh AMEN.

Giles is being a prig. He'll have to come around but still. 

It's amazing to me how in canon everyone NOT a vampire seemed to "know" just what a vampire is and what a vampire can think, do and feel and when an actual vampire tells them otherwise no one listens. Buffy knows though. She can feel the love he has for her and knows it is not just possible but that it is.

Kathleen

 

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter Twenty-Three on October 18, 2017 04:28am Liked

Bingo! Hey in the real world a person is LUCKY if even one friend becomes a life-long one. Usually we drift apart to one degree or another sometimes forever. To make a life choice based on what our FRIENDS think is crazy. Besides if they truly are your friends they will come around and be loving and supportive.

She's right in her priorities. Her husband and family matter. Yeah it hurts but too bad in the long run.

Hell in canon the friends toss her out of her house and betray her and her Watcher dumps a ton of responsibility on her fragile, depressed shoulders and then leaves!

Kathleen

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