that was a bit o'fun and some intrigue mixed into the deal. I am really curious as to who is looking for Spike and how Glory will fit into the world. I had to grin when Buffy wasn't sure if Spike was hitting on her. Leaves her guessing but I bet she will be thinking about him.[Report This]
For an alternate reality, this does a great job of shifting the characters into totally realistic and smoothly fitting positions given their original placements. I liked the addition of Ben as the doctor and I was wondering if Gaven was a real character who dated Cordy at some point.
The scene in the alley was a great twist on the alley scene when Buffy and Spike first met. You gave yours a great twist to make it original.
Your writing is a pleasure to read. I enjoy how well you describe your scenes. Thanks for sharing your skills with us. I look forward to more of this story.[Report This]
I wonder what Spike did to break away from the Family. He had to be devious and lucky. Loved that his little demonstration kept him cool as a cucumber but his conversation with Buffy left him all-a-flutter and smiley. I'm really enjoying your pacing--it's a slow unfold.[Report This]
Ooh! I really liked this first chapter. Spike is hooked on Buffy's spirit, which I think has always been at the core of the spuffy dynamic. You had violence and verbal sparring between the blond duo--it feels like Tuesday all over again :)[Report This]