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magnus374 commented on Three on January 31, 2018 07:20am

We learned some more interesting things and got more good interaction. I especially liked the talk Buffy and Willow had. 

Too bad this is all there is but I liked what we had.

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magnus374 commented on Two on January 31, 2018 07:10am

Riley's reaction to Buffy fighting of that man seems in character. Buffy is learning that she likes the fighting, in that she and Spike is very alike. I liked the interaction between them.

Also good how you used known characters.

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magnus374 commented on One on January 31, 2018 06:57am

A good AU scenario, things are twisted in a way that do fit the characters, they are different but still themself.

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jhiz commented on Three on May 04, 2014 03:56am Liked

It would be fun to see the training session.  I am betting the Buffy has natural talent that impresses Spike even while he fights to not tease her about her lack of power or something equally snarky.

Anyway, this is a fun start of a tale. 

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jhiz commented on Two on May 03, 2014 11:58pm Liked

that was a bit o'fun and some intrigue mixed into the deal.  I am really curious as to who is looking for Spike and how Glory will fit into the world.  I had to grin when Buffy wasn't sure if Spike was hitting on her.  Leaves her guessing but I bet she will be thinking about him.

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jhiz commented on One on May 03, 2014 09:40pm Liked

For an alternate reality, this does a great job of shifting the characters into totally realistic and smoothly fitting positions given their original placements.  I liked the addition of Ben as the doctor and I was wondering if Gaven was a real character who dated Cordy at some point.

The scene in the alley was a great twist on the alley scene when Buffy and Spike first met.  You gave yours a great twist to make it original.

Your writing is a pleasure to read.  I enjoy how well you describe your scenes.  Thanks for sharing your skills with us.  I look forward to more of this story.

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VB247 commented on Three on January 18, 2014 03:29am Liked

think you should continue this! would really like it if you did lol 

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VB247 commented on Three on January 18, 2014 03:29am

think you should continue this! would really like it if you did lol 

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Jelly commented on Three on May 05, 2013 01:10am

Oooooo. More please!

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Amasirol commented on Three on September 27, 2012 05:46am Liked

I wonder what Spike did to break away from the Family. He had to be devious and lucky. Loved that his little demonstration kept him cool as a cucumber but his conversation with Buffy left him all-a-flutter and smiley. I'm really enjoying your pacing--it's a slow unfold.

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Havena commented on Three on September 26, 2012 09:36pm Liked

I'm terrible with leaving comments but I am loving the story. You have me really intrigued as to Spike's back story.

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Pam S commented on Three on September 26, 2012 07:56pm Liked

waiting for the Sunday lessons.. enjoyed

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Pam S commented on Two on September 26, 2012 07:49pm Liked

enjoyed... love the "snark"..

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Pam S commented on One on September 26, 2012 07:36pm Liked

enjoyed.. love a tough Buffy and an appreciative Spike..

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Amasirol commented on Two on September 19, 2012 04:27am Liked

I'm glad you updated. I'm liking their interactions. Riley's over-protectiveness translates well into an AU story. I'm wondering if Spike is running away from Angelus or the Master.

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PeaceHeather commented on Two on September 18, 2012 08:43pm Liked

I adore this. You cover Riley's patronizing attitude very realistically. He disguises it as concern, but it really is a need to control, and Buffy is too young to recognize it as such. Nicely done!

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PeaceHeather commented on One on August 30, 2012 09:30pm Liked

Mmm, is this all or do yo uhave more planned? 'Cause I like.

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Amasirol commented on One on August 30, 2012 02:22pm Liked

Ooh! I really liked this first chapter. Spike is hooked on Buffy's spirit, which I think has always been at the core of the spuffy dynamic. You had violence and verbal sparring between the blond duo--it feels like Tuesday all over again :)

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sober_angel commented on One on August 30, 2012 06:41am Liked

I'm really liking this so far! This fic already seems like it's going to be great...funny, emotional, mysterious...draws me in! Can't wait to read your next update. Hope it's soon

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