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TeamEricNSookie commented on Epilogue on March 21, 2021 04:55pm

That was a hell of a ride and at times frustrating as F.  There were a couple of times I thought of just walking away but alas I made it to the end.  This was A Gem of a Story. 

I have many thoughts but in lieu of this being years later and irrelevant to the story's outcome I'll spare you. 

Thanks for sharing your vision of a Spuffy HEA

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TeamEricNSookie commented on Chapter 29 on March 20, 2021 03:23am

Deep breath... I've been with you this whole time.  But this is too much. He would have known and wouldn't have done tha .  I'm willing to give it a few more chapters to see if you can torn this around.  {head hung low, sulking off} 

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starlightmusic commented on Chapter 19 on March 12, 2021 03:46pm

I've really enjoyed this story so far and the way you've crafted it, I could see it actually happening canonically. I'm not sure if anything will change in the following chapters, but I'm having a lot of trouble buying the news article. The would-be gang rape, potential murder victim saying that her attackers were just stupid boys that didn't deserve it? I think this would work better if her sympathy for her would-be assaulters was toned down and she came off as more confused/ambivalent. Gang rapists are not stupid boys - they are vile scum that should be permanently removed. It felt like a downplay of how utterly devastating such crimes are and how they can permanently ruin the lives of their victims and the people around them.

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Miral commented on The Missing Chapter on January 24, 2021 09:47pm Liked

Awesome story! Excellent! 

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acekoomboom commented on The Missing Chapter on December 13, 2020 08:56pm

I was expecting this chapter to go further than the last one, since it came after. Feels like the two epilogues are backwards. I'm glad I finished this story and glad so many people so clearly love it. Congrats. I can't even believe people are able ti write things this long!

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acekoomboom commented on Epilogue on December 13, 2020 08:27pm

 That's cool that you took feedback and adjusted. And that was a really funny chapter all around.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 71 on December 13, 2020 08:20pm

I adored your end note here, seeing your reasoning for why you made the choices you did.  And you could always fo another fic that's revolved around Spike not dying bc of the gem. But I agree, that moment was so good for him. It was good for him to be a hero in his own right, not just a sidekick to someone else. I'm so glad you kept it here. And that the RING was her first clue he was back! I thought he was just gonna call when he got corporeal again or something. That was cool as crap.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 70 on December 13, 2020 04:59pm

I freaking love this!! Spike's whole life he has defined himself by the woman he loves. He did something good for the sake of his own goodness, he wanted to svae the world. I'm overjoyed for him. My heart is broken for Buffy. Will Spike pop out the amulet and go back to his wife? I can't wait to see. Terrified to see how Buffy will react when she realises he isn't in that crater.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 69 on December 13, 2020 01:46pm

I heard that foreshadowing in her mind. And am wondering how this amulet deal is gonna go now that Spike wouldn't dare leave Buffy - his wife, his lover, his best friend, his confidant, his everything.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 68 on December 13, 2020 01:31pm

 I love everything about this chapter. I love that Dawn wasn't involved in the betrayal and was able tk help her coke out of this funk. It was nice tk see Buffy defend herself a bit better from it, too. 

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 67 on December 13, 2020 01:16pm

Kicked out of her OWN HOUSE, AGAIN. These people infuriate me. Put all the pressure and change on Buffy then stab her in the back for it.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 66 on December 12, 2020 11:34pm

Noooooooo I thought Xander might be able to avoid loosing the eyes here.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 65 on December 12, 2020 11:26pm

Wait but he did tell Buffy about his mom tho? Didn't he?

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 64 on December 12, 2020 11:17pm

He knew. As soon as he said dancing, he knew. Oh my goodness the tension was palpable only to the audience, that was so good.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 63 on December 12, 2020 11:06pm

Girl that was a dangerous thing to say out loud just now.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 62 on December 12, 2020 10:59pm

Awww protect the decorations at all costs. It's weird not tk have Dawn here w all the other teens.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 61 on December 12, 2020 10:48pm

How RUDE to mess up their anniversary like that.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 60 on December 12, 2020 10:42pm

They can not catch a break for ANYTHING

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 59 on December 12, 2020 10:14pm

Hahaha they're playing bad for him that's so funny

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 58 on December 12, 2020 09:55pm

That was a cute way for them to have that talk about her kink.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 57 on December 12, 2020 09:45pm

Ypu had me real nervous there for a minute. Bc of Spike, Anya and Xander were saved, and Tara was saved bc Spike killed Warren before had a chance to get off a second shot. Buffy and Spike may be getting rhe absolute WORST luck ever, but her friends have it really really good in your universe.

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acekoomboom commented on Part V - Chapter 56 on December 12, 2020 09:23pm

Bruh how pissed is she going tl be when she wakes up?

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 55 on December 12, 2020 09:12pm

 WAIT NO HOLD UP I was not expecting that!!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 54 on December 12, 2020 01:27pm

Seriously, this story is the antithesis of everythinf that can go wrong will go wrong

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 53 on December 12, 2020 01:06pm

That was a nice and productive conversation :)

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 52 on December 12, 2020 12:59pm

That was such a sweet wedding!!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 51 on December 12, 2020 12:28pm

I wonder how long it will take Spike to semi normal again this time a round when everyone is actually supporting him, plus Dawn and Buffy still love him. And Joyce is here!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 50 on December 12, 2020 12:18pm

Lololol she's gonna try to shag the soul right out of him to hahaha. This is all kinda of twisted up.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 49 on December 12, 2020 12:06pm

He's gonna be so different when he comes back! I don't think Buffy wanted him to get a soul.she was finally happy, so happy with them And the way things were. Now she's gonna have to deal with crazy.

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acekoomboom commented on Part IV - Chapter 48 on December 12, 2020 11:43am

Oh no! Mkre drama. Yikes. They're in the apartment together, all married. Awwww.

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