I'm sad to admit I haven't read the comics, so I was a bit lost, but that's not your fault! I liked it and I'm happy you are giving writing a chance. Keep up the good work. Btw- a beta is someone that reads your fic and proofreads it before you post it. Spelling, punctuation, grammar, blah, blah. It's very helpful. If you look at the members of this site, it'll say if they're a beta or not, so you can email random people (everyone is so nice here so don't hesitate to do that) and also continue to ask for one on the chapters you post, just in case. Hope that helps. Again, good job.
Author's Response: I figured that's what a beta did but wasn't sure how to get one, thanks! Hopefully you were able to enjoy despite lack of comic read-age (Season 8 is iffy but 9 is Spuffy-tastic).