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alya commented on Chapter 9 on March 03, 2012 08:03pm Liked

You have written this beautifully. Thank you.

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alya commented on Chapter 7 on March 03, 2012 07:53pm Liked

Hooray - Willow's back. Hip hip hooray - she can find Spike. And (I know it's mean) I really hope that will mean goodbye Bob! 

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venusinette commented on Epilogue on March 03, 2012 07:02pm Liked

Beautiful story and knowing this is your first fanfic I have only one word to say: Bravo

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magnus374 commented on Epilogue on March 03, 2012 11:39am Liked

Spike and Buffy back together and the rebirth of magic, two things I would like the comics end with. I don't belive that will happen though, so this story was good. The story felt bittersweet but it was well made.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 13 on March 03, 2012 11:16am Liked

I feel sorry for Bob and Buffy but it wasn't a surprice.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 12 on March 03, 2012 11:06am Liked

Good use of the comics. When I read issue 6 I did wonder if Severin could have made Spike the father. When I know what will happen does this chapter feel really sad.

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sallyntmare commented on Epilogue on March 03, 2012 09:28am Liked

Thank you so much for such a wonderful read, not many fics bring actual tears to my eyes. I hope to see something from you again soon.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 11 on March 03, 2012 08:40am Liked

It is a hard situation for Bob.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 9 on March 03, 2012 08:23am Liked

A sort of sad feeling about what have been lost.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 7 on March 03, 2012 05:58am Liked

Good work on Buffys thoughts.

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SeaPea commented on Epilogue on March 03, 2012 03:40am Liked

Just did the marathon of chaps 7-15.  I'm not usually a fan of first person POV but this worked very well.  Also the switches from present to past.  You wrote the characters very well (the Spike voice was perfect).  And I have to agree with your feelings in the author's notes about Spike being OOC in Angel.  He would have gone back to Buffy!  Thank you for writing this amazing story.  I'll be looking for more of your Spuffy work.

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erkika commented on Epilogue on March 03, 2012 01:56am Liked

Make me cry, why dontcha! Lovely story. Thanks for sharing it

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PeaceHeather commented on Epilogue on March 03, 2012 12:16am Liked

For some reason, fics that show Buffy and Spike together in a future where they outlive their descendants (or just hers, or just the Scoobeis') always make me cry like little girl. It's so bittersweet to think of them going on when everyone they love is dead. So thank you for giving them an out, and I'm going to go hide in my closet and sob now.

Wonderfully well written story. In context, having things take years in between when Spike disappears and returns makes sense. Thank you so much for this.

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PeaceHeather commented on Chapter 13 on March 02, 2012 11:59pm Liked

Thank you for not making Spike just magically all better on the same day that Bob was killed. Also, I kinda expected it, that the shock Spike needed in order to come back to himself would have to do with Buffy's welfare and not his own.

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ginar369 commented on Epilogue on March 02, 2012 10:58pm Liked

Okay I just read chapters 7 thru the end and can I just say WOW! The first couple of new ones had me on pins and needles wondering if they would ever find him again. Then after they found him I wondered how it would work with Spike in her life. I knew Spike wouldn't couldn't be happy watching her with someone else. They Bob died (oh I liked the way you did that. No big bad just a normal every day car accident.) and she almost used Spike in his mindless state to make herself feel better. I was horrified at the thought even knowing Spike probably would have been okay with it if he had been in his right mind. But she stopped herself and I was relieved. Then to have him get back to himself because she was giving up. Then the two of them apart for awhile. It made it perfect, they finally got it right this time. But the whole immortal thing, yeah she misses heaven, so glad to know Spike will be joining her. Only one problem with their plan. What if only one of them buys it in the next showdown? If the remaining one commits suicide I don't think they'll get into heaven. I hope they plan it perfectly. I would hate to see them lose each other again.

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PeaceHeather commented on Chapter 9 on March 02, 2012 08:53pm Liked

*happysigh* Oh, this is so sweet and touching. Although I kinda hate that Buffy had to wait years for Spike to come back. Don't worry, I get why - I'm just sad for her.

This is so heartbreakingly lovely.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6 on March 02, 2012 12:22pm Liked

So well done and it follows what we know could be possible from the comics so far.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on March 02, 2012 12:00pm Liked

Intense, and answers some questiens.

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PeaceHeather commented on Chapter 6 on March 02, 2012 01:09am Liked

Argh - this is all so lovely and aching, and I read all the chapters you've posted at once, hoping that Spike would be back at the end of this one. And he isn't and I'm getting all twitchy. :)

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alya commented on Chapter 6 on March 01, 2012 05:41pm Liked

That was lovely - it's not often I feel sympathy for Angel.

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alya commented on Chapter 5 on March 01, 2012 05:33pm Liked

Really loving this and also quite desperate for Spike to arrive - you're doing the tension brilliantly.

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alya commented on Chapter 3 on March 01, 2012 05:25pm Liked

This is galloping along and I'm galloping with it! It's very exciting.

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alya commented on Chapter 1 on March 01, 2012 05:10pm Liked

Great first chap.

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ginar369 commented on Chapter 6 on March 01, 2012 03:14pm Liked

It might be just me but is anyone else bothered by Dowling being married to Buffy. I don't read the comics but I'm pretty sure he and Spike were friends. So now he is married to the woman his friend was in love with and is also being called dad by the other man's son. And Buffy isn't much better, how long had Spike been gone before she moved on? With Spike's friend no less. Plus she was having warm and fuzzy feelings for Angel again?! She is like an emotional slut! Jeez woman figure out who you actually love and stick with it!

Otherwise I am enjoying the story.



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Sorry you're angry with her!  I don't think it's OOC for her to act this way - she does this with Angel and Spike all the time on the show, and most lately in season 8 - she has world ending (literally) sex with Angel, and then fantasizes about Spike mere hours later.  I want to smack her upside the head too, but that's who she is.  

 

As for Dowling, I didn't want a new character, and they've been setting him up as the love interest this season - Spike's actually encouraging Dowling to hook up with Buffy in the latest issue - so he seemed like the obvious choice.  But it's years later, so, don't hate her too much.

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science commented on Chapter 1 on March 01, 2012 11:35am Liked

This is a great start. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

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Immortal Beloved commented on Chapter 1 on March 01, 2012 03:36am Liked

Like what you have so far. :-)


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CeCe commented on Chapter 1 on February 29, 2012 08:11pm Liked

Holy cow. Keep going?  LOVE this....


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erkika commented on Chapter 1 on February 29, 2012 07:23pm Liked

Oh I am so excited- new comics story and new quality author! Great start. Keep up the good work :)

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on February 29, 2012 05:27pm Liked

Interesting beginning, she didn't have an abortion then.

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letitia commented on Chapter 1 on February 29, 2012 12:21pm Liked

Wow I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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