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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 1 on January 06, 2016 07:45am

 Oh, Lorne, ohhh!! This was written poorly and was a bit confusing, but those are all things that can be practiced and mastered. What can not be learned but you do have is ideas. Ethan being willing to shove souls into people just because it would bring caos? Apsolutely, positutely genius! Angel's soul habit spreading down his sire lines, making Drusilla get her soul back? Whaaaat, no way! The idea and plot for this story was grand. If someone had cleaned the edges up for you a bit, this story would go on my favorites list. I hope that I always remember Ethan bringing caos through souls. Maybe I will even use that one day. This was a good read abd I am glaf that I stopped by. Thanks for putting this out there for us to read, I enjoyed it.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 1 on January 02, 2016 09:13am Liked

Love this! Wish there were more! 

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on December 20, 2015 01:13pm

Oh yeah... that is about how it would work *laugh*

Got the point across even if you weren't able to build the world too deeply.

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Era Dubois commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2015 11:38pm Liked

I like the minimalism. The story is concise and quite entertaining. Thank you.

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Bobby commented on Chapter 1 on April 14, 2015 05:17pm Liked

I liked it ! Short, but nice ! Hope you develop it one day, it's worthed !

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on March 15, 2014 01:31am Liked

*snicker*  sad picture you paint but cute ending.  Glad Lorne was not surprised but wonder if he enjoyed the view.  Can just imagine the helpful comments from his overly bright red mouth.

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Deer-Shifter commented on Chapter 1 on December 29, 2013 02:10am

Very funny at the end. like it a lot.

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waddiwasiwitch commented on Chapter 1 on July 24, 2013 07:43pm

Love this.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on July 07, 2011 03:38pm Liked

Interesting but short, it has great potential to be fleshed out into a long story.

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wlr312 commented on Chapter 1 on July 07, 2011 01:28am Liked

Fabulous! It says so much in just a few words. And great choice for Spike's song, he has to be a fan of the Clash, plus the lyrics are so perfect. (I don't know if it's just me, but it's kind of hard to tell when there is a time change)

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