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Puppet commented on Chapter 1 on January 19, 2020 10:55am Liked

Wonderful S7 moment! :)

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 1 on March 31, 2019 06:22am Liked

“Because you’re Buffy.”

- Oh that loving faith 💘 So essential for them both right now.

“Happy not-birthday Slayer.”

- Squee! Love this perfect little snapshot of how he knows her so well 💙

Really enjoyed this tender little moment, thanks so much 💙💜

 

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srbeaver commented on Chapter 1 on January 02, 2019 11:53pm Liked

I love quiet moments between Spike and Buffy.

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kimothyschma commented on Chapter 1 on May 29, 2018 10:41am Liked

I love this!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 1 on May 02, 2018 10:30pm

 Awwwwww. That was a very sweet iade, Biffy waiting alone for her birthday to finally pass, and Spike coming to pass the time with her. I love how he understands he, does not try to push her or get her to tell him what she wants from him; he already knows. He has always known. So they sat, barely an inch between them, staring into the dark back yard. He was breathing in time with her, and she idly wondered if he did it on purpose. Timing his breath to match the human he’s with. Memories raced through her, unbidden, proving her theory wrong. This seems like nothing, but it felt like such an important part in the story to me. It reminded you of how much history they have, how many different things they've been through together. They hated each other they fought each other, they had rude terrible sex with each other, they found peace with each other. Their past is extremely complicated, and brought them to exactly where they are now. I think it was perfectly placed in the story to remind the reader of that, and to set up the reminder that Spike has always known. He is always seen write down to the deepest parts of Buffy. He was her Ally when she really needed it, she told her truths that she refused to see for herself, he was the dark and disgusting monster that she wanted him to be, and then he went and got the one thing that could possibly make her look at him differently... A soul. And it worked. This was such a sweet little story. They just sat in silence, waiting for her birthday to go by, because Spike knew exactly what she was doing out there. That was proven by him telling her happy not birthday after midnight had passed. See, again that's the author showing us exactly what we need to know about them. Letting us come to the conclusion on our own, not spelling it out for us, just showcasing how wonderful Spike and Buffy are together. I think this little fan fiction was beautifully written, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for it, have a great day.

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MichelleZed commented on Chapter 1 on December 30, 2017 08:14pm

I like to think they had these little moments, even though they probably didn't.

Thanks for the read!

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relurker commented on Chapter 1 on October 12, 2016 05:47am Liked

This is beautiful, what a good inner voice you wrote for Buffy! And the interaction was just right, too. I loved it.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 1 on January 02, 2016 08:57am Liked

Very cute.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on December 16, 2014 07:45pm

for such a quiet little piece, this packs a punch.  I think the small moments are what make a strong relationship and this one is a beautiful example of what they could have had if the writers were a wee bit kinder.  Thank you for sharing a sweet little moment that I can imagine in my head as fitting into the season so that everything is not doom and gloom every moment.

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Spyroulina commented on Chapter 1 on March 13, 2014 07:50pm Liked

So sweet!

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mazza commented on Chapter 1 on September 13, 2011 08:47pm Liked

lovely piece of writing - so peaceful and so wistful, why oh why couldn't everyone see they were made for each other.

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aphasia commented on Chapter 1 on July 07, 2011 06:14pm Liked

I really liked this, thanks... Although I wanted them to go for that walk...

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on July 07, 2011 03:28pm Liked

A nice birthday for her, but since nothing bad happend, we never heard about it.

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