ILoveLamp commented on Annoy on July 02, 2012 07:15pm

Buffy turned her attention towards Xander. “Do you think you could drive me down to the store really quick? I need to buy straws.”

This line really got me.

“Ok. First of all, so skanky! And she kept hitting on me…”

Also that one.

Good stuff so far.

ILoveLamp commented on Annoy on July 02, 2012 06:18pm

Buffy turned her attention towards Xander. “Do you think you could drive me down to the store really quick? I need to buy straws.”

This line really got me.

“Ok. First of all, so skanky! And she kept hitting on me…”

Also that one.

Good stuff so far.

WilcoRules commented on Unrequited on March 20, 2011 08:15pm

Loving the conversations.  They are spot on and in character.  Thanks for sharing with us.

Author's Response: Thank You!

nojiri23 commented on Unrequited on March 18, 2011 01:50am

Really really great update. I especially enjoyed the conversations between Dawn and Spike and between Cordelia and Willow. Very sweet and poignant and true to life.

Author's Response: Thank you!

magnus374 commented on Annoy on March 16, 2011 11:13am

More nice stories, good.

Author's Response: thanks!

Puddinhead commented on Hate on March 11, 2011 04:04pm

This was nice.  Your opening draws the reader in - wondering who is doing the talking here.  My favorite bit was Giles' looking at her very much in the manner he looks at Summerian texts :)  Cute.

Author's Response: Thank you!