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magnus374 commented on Helping the Not-Helpless on August 04, 2019 09:41am

 It really is too bad that this is all we got. I really liked how this is played out. Things are starting to look up for Buffy but now someone is looking for me. I guess it could be Riley I suppose but why now?

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magnus374 commented on Knowledge on August 04, 2019 09:30am

I really like this chapter. We are learning more about the characters and I liked all the different interaction we saw here. This chapter sets up things for the next one in an interesting way. I could see many good and interesting details.

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magnus374 commented on What's the Password on August 04, 2019 09:01am

 My heart really feels for them, It's so bad for them. I did like Buffy's break in and how prepared she was and how well she did what she planned. I also liked what we saw of the people of Angel investigation.

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magnus374 commented on Aliases and Faux Pas on August 04, 2019 08:50am

 And the dark scenario is continuing. This is not a good scenario for Buffy (or any of her family) but what can she do, she do have family to support.

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magnus374 commented on Prologue: Wrecked on August 04, 2019 08:42am

A dark beginning. It isn't spelled out but it seems rather clear what happened. Dawn has been sheltered from it and that means she doesn't understand why the family split up. That make the anger understandable but it makes it worse for Buffy.

Apparently Buffy has been acting as some kind of vigilante and now Trick and Mayor Wilkins wanted to clean out any connection between them.

This is starting in a dark and strong way, it makes me want more.

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letitia commented on Helping the Not-Helpless on July 03, 2010 11:42am Liked

I just got caught up in this story. I can't wait to find out more of the story and where did Maxie come from? My heart goes out to all of them

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Cordykitten commented on Helping the Not-Helpless on July 01, 2010 09:21pm Liked

YAY for the new job. But someone is interested in Buffy. Can be good or bad, not sure now. Could be good... but maybe it sounds only as if the unknown person wants to help Buffy.

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Cordykitten commented on Knowledge on June 22, 2010 07:36pm Liked

Funny meeting - and now Buffy knows they weren't after her. Hiring a lawyer, I hope that will turn out well for Buffy. If it goes well she would be free, no more running.
Photographic memory is handy for a detective. :)
And she was a detective before so her last case was the mayor I guess.
Looking forward to more.

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diary of madness commented on Knowledge on June 22, 2010 06:59pm Liked

ooh!!! I really like the story and want to know more!!! (the photographic memory is a great touch!)

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dipole_moment commented on What's the Password on June 07, 2010 04:20am Liked

Oooo, I love resourceful Buffy.  More soon please k?

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Cordykitten commented on What's the Password on June 06, 2010 09:06pm Liked

Ah... Buffy fears that they are after her. I'd thought it was because of the casino. Should they be after her that's bad. But she was clever finding her way into the agency (AI).
If they ever find out what she did it should be good enough to get hired. ;)
If they don't mind her personal history; and that she is still in danger because of that.

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epd4 commented on Aliases and Faux Pas on June 06, 2010 02:01pm Liked

really interesting, looking forward to the next chapter:)

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kspuffyk commented on Aliases and Faux Pas on June 06, 2010 02:25am Liked

I love it please update.

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Cordykitten commented on Aliases and Faux Pas on June 05, 2010 12:10pm

I've started to read this one @ FF.net but I'll continue to read it here.
Oh Buffy has a baby now (and has to take pills?). Didn't expect the baby from the first chapter but I wonder now if that's involved in the killing. But between serving drinks Buffy works as a hooker in the evenings? That was the impression I've got.
*nods* Indeed a hooker. That's why she can't get another job? Nothing that pays so much?
But Buffy didn't take the money? Then she knows that she is in trouble when a detective agency is snooping around. Or will loose this job soon. Well it's not a good one anyway when you have to sell yourself (even is this brings money).

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rkm commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 06, 2010 12:48pm Liked

oh no - poor joyce! and now buffy and dawn are gonna be needing each other even more. and how will the fang gang enter in the picture? (and please don't tell buffy becomes interested in angel ...)

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I_T commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 05, 2010 06:59pm Liked

Yikes! Great beginning!

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ArinnaB commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 05, 2010 05:46pm Liked

You've drawn me in. Very nice start, I especially love the air of mystery covering everything so we don't exactly know what's happening...

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lozza312 commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 05, 2010 04:32am Liked

wow great prologue, loving the storyline so far, definitely will be looking forward to the next update :)

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Amasirol commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 05, 2010 04:29am Liked

Start with a bang, why don't you? I'm all in a tizzy wondering the how, what and why...you've got me hooked.

Going to wait patiently twirling my thumbs--hoping that your muse will be on a roll and that many updates will follow.

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NeomeBuffy commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 05, 2010 02:22am Liked

Whoa. Nice beginning. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Good blurb/intro on the main page too. The idea of the casino definitely drew me in.

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Nova commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 04, 2010 11:54pm Liked

well that's very interesting - I would like to know what happend though I can speculate that Hank was an asshole this time as well.

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epd4 commented on Prologue: Wrecked on March 04, 2010 08:13pm Liked

interesting start, looking forward to finding out what happens

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