This as a series? Absolutely! Smut all the way! More hot scenes. Maybe Angel walking in on them? Driving Angel mad with jealousy that Buffy chose his step brother over him? Angel trying to rub it in Buffy's face with Darla?
Maybe a tad cliché, but it could work?
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This is really well written, and piping hot, too. I wish you'd have extended it; the twist at the end left me hanging with bated breath.
Thanks for sharing. :)
Author's Response: Ooooh, I like to hear that!! I did continue it, so if you're still around, there's more fun to be had, along with a litttttle bit of angst. Thanks for the review!! [Report This]
That was amazing! I love the portrayal of Buffy as not a meek little virgin, she knew what she wanted and how to get it. Very nice twist at the end. I think it would be great as a series, maybe have Spike know previously how old she is, throw some Angel drama in there for a good time. It works well as a one shot as well though.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing her as a more... prowly virgin lol. I did make it a series, I have another 3 oneshots posted after this one, hopefully you'll enjoy the rest as much as you enjoyed this one :) Thanks for the review :)
Please make this into a series! It was fantastic!!
Author's Response: lol Thank! It will be made into a series, but I have so much going right now, I'm focusing on that. A new installment will come soon though. Thanks for reviewing.
Ha! What an ending. Totally didn't see that coming. There definitely needs to be more of this.
Author's Response: =D I'm glad you enjoyed. I have some of the next part to this written, but my hands are full wit others right now so I won't get a chance to put the update up yet. But a continuance will come! Thanks for reviewing.
I like it alot.! the ending got me! i cant wait 2 read the next part :)
Author's Response: lol Im glad you enjoyed! More will come soon, a little bit stuck on the sequel. But I am trying hard to get it out there for people to read. Thanks for reviewing!
Hahaha Love the ending!!! He totally made her at the end. Classic! Oh this is going to be fun. More please!!
Author's Response: Hahahaha, thanks DFL. I like this review. Made me giggle. I hope you enjoy the next installment too! Thanks for reviewing!