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fyreburned commented on Chapter 28 on April 21, 2016 01:43pm Liked

Hey, Beth,

Had to go back and re-read some of this. Had forgotten this last chapter.

You last updated this the last year my partner/fiance Ed was alive. Might've even missed this update; it was a pretty hectic year. And I know around that time, and when you stopped writing, you had a pile of life upheaval and change too.

But have been thinking of this one a lot, and you, lately. I do wish you were still writing. And I know I'm not alone in wishing you'd update this one.

I recently watched a 10 episode TV series, I think it was on Smithsonian Channel but not sure, called "The Great Human Race". Two Primitive Survivalism and Anthropology Instructors, man & woman, tackle life in conditions approximating prehistoric life. It was definitely better than most whiney reality shows. Each episode addressed a different time in the progression of humanity. They only would be allowed to use tools etc that would've been available and utilizable at that time. And they had to make any such tools, clothes, hunt and search for food and water, and more. 

Man, I hope they had their shots, and got dental! Made me think about Buffy & her love of a toothbrush and a shower! A cave was a luxury to these folks!

Anyway, watching this show really brought back memories of this fic, so had to re-visit it. And if you haven't seen "The Great Human Race", let me recommend it to you. 

Am still hoping you'll write some more one day!

~~Kara Fyreburned

 

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MissKilla commented on Chapter 28 on October 28, 2015 09:33am Liked

Can has more updates please?

I've never actually read the books, but know a bit of the story from having a mother who's obsessed with them. 

I am absolutely in love with this story, and even if it has been 5 years, I really do hope you have it in you to start writing on it again. 

Author's Response on October 29, 2015 12:05am

I received this review today and I dont know why, maybe the supermoon LOL, but it has spurred me to reread and try to finish this story.  This story was hard to write, and yes I know how it ends.  Its just putting the words out there.  Thank you.  I think I do need to finish this.  And read the Clan books some day.  They are amazing.  Have patience with me.  Its been a long time since Ive written, but this one has a special place in my heart.

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EmilytheSlayer323 commented on Chapter 2 on December 23, 2014 11:54pm Liked

*rubs hands together* I'M SO PUMPED FOR THIS!!

So... Buffy going back in time to save the girl? That's cool... gotta love time travel.

  I could jump out a window, I'm so excited. Like, this is such a cool idea....yeah

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:16pm

working on a new chapter now :)

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EmilytheSlayer323 commented on Chapter 1 on December 23, 2014 11:50pm Liked

Oohhh!! I REALLY like where this is going! The idea of the little girl haunted Buffy in her dreams is so cool. THIS IS GONNA BE EXCITING!! *jumps up and down*

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VadeyFan commented on Chapter 28 on January 21, 2010 07:48am Liked

Nice to know you are still still working on this. It's a very complicated situation you constructed here, not easy to get out of. I really like where you going with the deep connection and understanding between Buffy and Spike.

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:17pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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letitia commented on Chapter 28 on January 06, 2010 11:19pm Liked

can I just tell you how excited I was to see this chapter.  I am so glad that you decided to continue.  I just knew that Spike would be willing to do anything to make Buffy happy.  I just hope that they really know what they are doing.  Going home or staying. either one of them will be a challenge.

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:17pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 28 on January 06, 2010 02:31pm Liked

It's good to have a new update. Some nice and tender moments in this chapter. It will be interesting to see how they will solve the problem with Buffys two bodies.

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:18pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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Spikelissa commented on Chapter 28 on January 06, 2010 02:09pm Liked

Snoopy dances...snoopy dance!!!!! Kitten updated!!!!!

I am so interested to know where this is going...will they stay or go?  How does that work with Buffy in Kaia's body, but the baby is Kaia (possibly), and Buffy has a body back home?  Hmmmmm....questions, questions, questions!

Great update, and RL can really take a lot out of people...damn responsibilities lol...Always work...never enough time to play...lol

Huggles you muchly!!!

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:18pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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peroxidelove commented on Chapter 28 on January 06, 2010 07:58am Liked

That was AMAZING! I've missed this story so much! I was actually wondering about it just yesterday and then I checked my mail today and here it is! The whole chapter was beautiful! Buffy and Spike with a baby :) I feel all warm and fuzzy now.

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:19pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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spygrrl76 commented on Chapter 28 on January 06, 2010 02:03am Liked

Sorry to hear about RL, but thanks for the update.  This was really touching and tender.  I'm just glad you are still continuing to write and post. :)

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:19pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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I_T commented on Chapter 28 on January 06, 2010 01:01am Liked

Argh! Lost my review! :P

Anyway...I'm so glad that you've come back to this fic. Muses can be such fickle things! Hope yours is being more cooperative now.

When Buffy says she doesn't want to have the baby there, does she think she can have it in Sunnydale? She's not in her own body, and Kaia belongs there, so I'm not sure what she's thinking...? Is she talking about having it in the small cave versus the clan cave?

Thanks so much for the update. :)

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:19pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 27 on October 21, 2009 01:33pm Liked

Wonderful chapter. Hope you're feeling better. Can't wait to see how you solve the problem of getting Buffy home without anyone dying. More please.

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:20pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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peroxidelove commented on Chapter 27 on October 21, 2009 01:47am Liked

baby Kaia? ah! your chapters keep getting better and better lovely one :) can't wait to find out about what Spike has to say about whats happening back in good old SunnyD. but still i bounce with joy about Buffy and Spike being together again! 

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Lou commented on Chapter 27 on October 20, 2009 08:30pm Liked

So ood to see Spike and Buffy together, You've set them one hell of a puzzle, and the Sunnydale situation is going to up the ante.  Can't wait for more.

Author's Response on November 03, 2015 10:20pm

working on this again.  look forward to an update very soon. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 27 on October 20, 2009 07:34pm Liked

Well they are together now and they seems to be fine with it.

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Spikelissa commented on Chapter 27 on October 20, 2009 06:57pm Liked

I have been so blah...so bear with me k?  I love the update!  I will stalk you over at the other sites soon.  LoL.  I'm a bit confuseled at how Buffy would go back, if she does.  You know, what with her being Kaia and the baby Kaia.

She may not want to go back, but I have a feeling when she hears what is going down at home, she will think twice.  Because, let's face it, Buffy has a martyr complex - even though she dislikes being the Slayer.  Me thinks she doth protest too much.  She loves it there because of Groma.  I was wondering what is the difference between timelines or dimensions?  Are they months or years to Sunnydale time?  How much time has really passed.  Cuz I got a sense that time has gone by tremendously where Buffy is, yet in Sunnydale, like only a few days has past - I give a week tops.  Hmmm sure you mentioned this...I'm brain dead today, lol.

I love how you have them both filled in.  I think Hourak will have something to say about Kaia being the baby.  Then when Spike adds what needs to be said...a solution will present itself.

Mostly, my brain is saying...Buffy will go back.  This is another dimension which this rift caused another Slayer in this dimension to be called when Buffy stepped into Kaia.  So I'm wondering if maybe she is suppose to be dead.  I know flame me...Something tells me when the baby is born and with the possibility (snif snif) of Groma gone and quite possibly on Hourak backing them up...Buffy will finally bite her tongue and leave with Baby in tow.

But I am just forming little scenarios in my head and can't wait til you surprise us all!  But my vote is in: Buffy will go back - even though she would rather stay.  And I think baby (kaia) will go along with her and Spike.

The suspense Kitten is getting excruciating!!!!!  I can't wait...hurry up...Giggles...Feel better hun...I'm not far behind, but (knock on wood) I don't get the flu - I get Bronchitis.  Ugh.  Hope your better and the crazy weather didn't do it...Shame on weather!  Hugs!  More soon! :)

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SanityFair commented on Chapter 27 on October 20, 2009 05:52pm Liked

I'm glad they are finally together and everything has been explained. I'm looking forward to Buffy's reaction to Spike's news from Sunnydale.

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I_T commented on Chapter 27 on October 20, 2009 04:05pm Liked

I'm glad Hourak knows now, but he has a lot to digest.

Thanks for the update. :)

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maryperk commented on Chapter 27 on October 20, 2009 02:54pm Liked

Cool chapter.  I like Spike being accepting of everything.  That'll help Buffy, I think.

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I_T commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 07:27pm Liked

"Bloody hell, it’s like a caveman soap opera with vampires. I would definitely watch that show." HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Love it. :)

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: *giggles* I would watch it too :) Thanks IT!

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Lou commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 05:44pm Liked

What a sweet welcome for Spike!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Lou! glad you liked!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 03:25pm Liked

Good chapter, they are together now the question is, how long will they stay. It could be a long time, Kaia must be born and probably raised to.

Author's Response: thanks magnus, the whole Kaia thing... lets just hope what ever they decide, that no one gets hurt...

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Nova commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 01:25pm Liked

i think i agree - i'd like to know whats going to happen too. love it want more. update soon

Author's Response: Thanks nova :) Groma should worry, thinks are spiraling.. but to where?

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Napoleon commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 12:09pm Liked

Oh my god, this line just made my day "Bloody hell, it’s like a caveman soap opera with vampires. I would definitely watch that show"

Thank you for a great story!





Author's Response: hehe That line tickled me too as I wrote it, but it sounded just like something he would say :P Thanks for reading and reviewing, Napoleon :)

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maryperk commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 11:01am Liked

Oh, thank you for the nice prezzie, kitten.  I love it.  But... MORE, EXPAND!!!!  LOL



Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed, Mary :) But expand? I dont think its possible *LMAO*

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peroxidelove commented on Chapter 26 on October 09, 2009 10:41am Liked

*claps and bounces in seat* buffy & spike found each other :) i felt all warmfuzzy inside reading the bit when his leg caught on fire and buffy got all concerned. you know how sometimes theres that one part you just have to read again, i think that was it for me!

oh yes! i saw your lovely comments on my fic over on spuffy realm :) i sent you a message about that, but in case you didn't get it, i can't get into my account! =O so until it's sorted i'll just be updating here :)

anyway, I be's excited for your next chapter! its really great now, it'll be phenomenal by the time you've finished! :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and sending me that email. So glad you are enjoying this story. Its my fav, and it took me a while to get started, fearing II wouldnt be able to do it justice. So comments like yours just make me smile. *hugs*

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Darknight commented on Chapter 25 on October 08, 2009 05:23am Liked

HAHA! Spike is here and Buffy found him. I can not wait for the next chapter. This story is really good, glad I got caught up with it again. 

Author's Response: Thanks Brett *hugs* next chapter is complete. should be posting anyday now, So glad you are enjoying !

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SanityFair commented on Chapter 25 on October 06, 2009 06:07pm Liked

Oh yes, finally! What fantastic chapter. I can hardly wait for the next.

Author's Response: Thanks sanityfair :) next chapter will post asap!

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I_T commented on Chapter 25 on October 01, 2009 03:57pm Liked

“Spike? Is that really you?” Squeeeeee!!!! lol Finally! :)

I love Spike's thoughts, especially: "I hope he’s telling him that I saved his ass last night and not something like I was hiding in the bushes staring at the little children." Trust Spike to think about being pervy!

Great update, thanks.

Author's Response: heehee ! Thanks IT, I know! very exciting! and pervy spike *smirks* gotta love him. more soon!

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Nova commented on Chapter 25 on October 01, 2009 03:40pm Liked

:) -  glad they found each other - looking foward to the next update

Author's Response: Thanks Nova :) Look for update at the beginning of the week!

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