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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 22 Betrayal! on August 15, 2021 06:18pm Liked

Ouch. Poor Buffy! So much betrayal from the people she's supposed to be able to trust. I can't see a way back for their friendship after this.

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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 17 Times Three on August 15, 2021 05:42pm

Spike, William, and the Demon - I am excited for this! I love feral, demon Spike.

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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 14 A Sort of Betrayal on August 15, 2021 05:01pm Liked

This story has really gone in a different direction to what I was expecting but I'm enjoying it! I wonder how they will get around the wiping-out-all-the-Aurelians snag.

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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 5 Play Time on August 15, 2021 02:54pm Liked

I love shy-but-sexually-curious William! And Buffy deciding that giving him a full education is more important than trying to get answers or being serious and responsible for once. 

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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 4 Revelations on August 15, 2021 02:35pm Liked

Interesting! I wonder why his William side has come out to play. Their interactions are wonderful here.

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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 2 Normal Girls on August 15, 2021 02:05pm Liked

So steamy! And I love how natural they can be around each other when there's no one else getting in the way.

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lafillesauvage commented on Chapter 1 One Question on August 15, 2021 01:46pm Liked

What a beautiful opening - looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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Notte commented on Chapter 16 Not Your Girl on April 28, 2020 08:31pm Liked

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 12 Charms and Thralls on April 19, 2018 11:37pm

I'm really confused at this point

Author's Response on April 20, 2018 05:40am

Ah yes, you have reached the point where for some reason my nice, sexy little story took off to a completely different place.  Do stay with it - I think it is worth the ride!

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 10 Demon Fire on April 19, 2018 10:14pm Liked

This is the first story I've read that brings up the survivor's guilt that Dawn must have experienced. Poor Dawn. And Buffy's sacrifice followed so closely after the loss of her mother, and then she learned her origin was a ball of green energy; no wonder Dawn behaved badly. No child could cope with this much trauma without acting out.

Oh, please make Buffy mistake the clan name as Oreos; even funnier.  Buffy and words, not so mixy. 

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 8 Never Ever Work on April 19, 2018 09:34pm Liked

Interesting conundrum you have created, and you've gotten her to finally admit that she loves Spike.

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 7 "What about me?" on April 19, 2018 09:25pm

Interesting existential dilemma re: William getting a vote on his continued "life" vs bringing back Spike. Could be like a multiple personality disorder in a human, and they need to find a way to integrate this William personality with the Spike personality. Kind of heart-breaking that this William, while a vampire, is still a good man: he has no knowledge of the century-plus of evil done to and by Spike. It's also interesting to see how much of William is in Spike.

Good poem! And once again, it's Anya who makes things perfectly clear. But they've already done it lots more than 3 times. Something else must be going on.

 

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 6 Monsters and Demons on April 19, 2018 09:13pm Liked

Ha, Buffy's driving adding that extra frisson of terror to William's first experience in a horseless carriage. Chuckling at William's good manners when engaging the Scoobies for the first time. And Anya, always the first to get it, and always ignored by the others. William is hilarious: screwing her into a near coma, but then insisting on politely calling her Miss Summers.

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 5 Play Time on April 19, 2018 09:06pm

And Buffy thinks to herself with respect to William/Spike's talents, "Sex is your art. You make it with your tongue, lick after lick. That final gasp. That look of satiety..." Sorry, couldn't resist the hotness of innocence plus natural talent that is William.

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 4 Revelations on April 19, 2018 08:52pm Liked

Oh, fun: innocent, virginal & confused William, but he catches on quickly. 

Author's Response on April 20, 2018 02:36am

So glad you are enjoying the story.  Look forward to your views on further chapters!  Thank you for reviewing.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 27 In every possible way on February 28, 2017 12:28pm Liked

This is lovely, but I could use a bit more about how they get on afterward... all of them.

 

A minor quibble: the Americans (especially Buffy) sound very, very British. 

Author's Response on March 01, 2017 06:56pm

Glad you liked the story but sad you thought the ending was a bit soft.  Actually, this was a story that was beta'd by an American or two, if I remember correctly.  I have given up trying to please everyone in the States because it seems that it varies from State to State what they consider to be "American".!! And anyway, if I have to read how Giles and Spike are written in practically every story I read……..!!!

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 26 Love, Desire and Need on February 28, 2017 10:46am

Finally, they get the success they wanted.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 25 Choices on February 28, 2017 10:39am

Jeez.... it just keeps not working right! 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 24 The Long Journey on February 28, 2017 05:18am

Well, one's back... got to hope for the best.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 23 Need on February 28, 2017 05:12am

Go, Dawn! I love when she gets to be a positive force! 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 22 Betrayal! on February 28, 2017 05:03am

I hate how Anya was under used and under appreciated on the show...

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 21 Not me - Us! on February 28, 2017 04:58am

Well, a big hurdle down... now for the clean up...

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 20 Mine! on February 28, 2017 12:35am

Aw, that is a sweet moment.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 19 The Loved Ones on February 28, 2017 12:32am

Poor Spike / William / Demon. Hope they heal soon.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 18 Our other brother on February 28, 2017 12:27am Liked

Spike really can be quite stubborn.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 17 Times Three on February 28, 2017 12:22am

Ah, more sleuthing done. Closer to a solution.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 16 Not Your Girl on February 27, 2017 07:26pm

 Oh, Buffy. Your life would be better if you knew your own mind.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 15 "Did you Scream?" on February 27, 2017 05:24pm

 Ah, good. An alternative to killing all Aurelians.  Tho, btw, the Spike is the Master's great great grandchild (not great great great). 😊

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 14 A Sort of Betrayal on February 15, 2017 07:45pm

Can hardly blame Spike, but... still...

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 13 Fighting Desire on February 15, 2017 04:03am

Good thinking, Buffy. Nice to have Spike back.

Author's Response on February 15, 2017 04:13am

Ah, glad you read on.  It does all make sense, you know.  Well, it will eventually!  You've a long way to go yet!   And some people really struggled with the plot, so that was why I explained the charms at the beginning of chapters.

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