Good times. :) Buffy made some great clothing decisions. :D And this is probably my imagination, but, knowing that this is smut written by a guy, I notice there seems to be a lot of visual description of Buffy. Wonder if it's significant; interesting. Thank you for sharing! :)
Thank you for reviewing. I just wrote what I felt... I guess I'm a visual guy ;).
great job Andrei! u really are a great writer. You should listen to Sotia more often. I'm gonna read the second one soon but i totally have to write these papers but i did promise to check ur stuff out and it's really good :) my only thing and it's really minor is that i think ur use exclamation points when you don't need it. so just check out that usage otherwise i mean writer style and description wise it was great! good job :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this and I'll look into that exclamation point thing.As for Sotia, of course I listen to her :D
You know how I feel about it, but I wanted to shout it out, so...
I LOVED IT!!!!
I've never inspired anything and you writing this is... making me all teary eyed, again! Love you, I really do!
I love you too, baby and you're always my inspiration.
*kisses back with just as much passion*[Report This]