This is really good as it is. Although it would be nice to read about Spike being tossed out of hell and Buffy hopefully helping him recover, it is still a well done scene by itself.
You described the action of the fighting well as well as the emotional release the beating Angel got for all the things he had done to both Buffy and Spike. Perhaps not the most expected of therapies but it had to be at least slightly cathartic for the fighters.
*grin* and Hey, Spike saved the world even without a soul. Yay him.[Report This]
Oh Yeah!!! I want more of this story!!! :D
I loved how they double teamed Angelus and beat the crap out of him. :) So many revealing things came out as they vented their anger and frustrations. I also loved that Spike realized that if Buffy was the one that killed Angelus it would break her.
If there was ever any proof needed that a vampire "without a soul" could love, Spike proved it. And, he also "saved the world".
I definitely want to read more of this story!!!
I'm pleased you enjoyed the first bit. Yeah, I really liked that. I loved how it let them, though Buffy especailly, let things go. I really was trying to find a way for her to be able to get past his death. Yeah, Spike's good like that! Yup, that's our Spike! Thanks for reading! More is in the works![Report This]
Love it. I can just see Spike's cheeky grin as he says he's going to save the world. You just have to continue it. I have spoken.
Author's Response: Thanks. Me too! The visuals were so strong when I was writing this. I know it sounds stupid, like I'm delusional or something, but I saw this whole thing play out in my head over and over again before I finally gave in and wrote it down! lol, well, I guess I'll have to then! :)
Love the story! Can't wait to see what happens next! Please tell me that Angel won't miraculously come back from ashes!!!!! I really hate that pillock!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. lol, I'm not fond of him either, so I can assure with 99% surity that he won't be returning. but hey, that one percent and evil plot bunnies... ya never know! ;P
Thanks for sharing :D . I think it would be a great idea for you to continue the story, b/c this beginning was great!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! The ideas have een hovering over me, demanding me to write, so I'm sure I'll get them down in words sometime.
I really like this. It definitely has potential! Please, keep writing.
Are you going to have Buffy try to get him out, or just have him come back the way Angel does? I'd think that the former is less likely but cooler, but the latter begs the question of why he was brought back... no soul, right?
Thanks! I'm glad. I think perhaps I will. Though updates won't be seen soon. I have a fic exchange I have to get working on first... but I'll get to this!
Hey, now, that would be spoiling, wouldn't it! ;) but yes, no soul for our spikey...[Report This]
Ok. *note to self : read the flippin' warnings next time*
Nicely written. Of course I want to see Spike come back..
Loved that you put in the thing about the fish.. What a lameass thing to do for a bad evil vampire.. Hehe
lol. yes they are there for a reason! ;)
Thanks! Yeah, I'll have to find a way to do that, won't I? Can't have my fav character stuck eternally in Hell...
lol. Thanks![Report This]