Good story. i liked the changes made and the subtle switches. I'm surprised Dru and Wes ended up together. that was def a pair i did not see coming but i liked it. I enjoyed this epilogue but also the story of Buffy and William. I kinda wanted to hit Buffy when she was acting like Dru for Williams own good but she learned so it's ok lol.
i liked the story a lot but i have one gripe. there were so many spelling and grammatical errors it was beyond frustrating. u even say that giles married a woman named Oliver not Olivia. Having to decipher what you meant and not what you wrote took me out of the story a bunch of times. it's a great story it just really needs to be proof read.
great story though. plot is great :) [Report This]
what a way to enjoy your honeymoon. And to show both Buffy and Spike as parents with their concern over Elizabeth was just too cute. And I loved his comment back.. Out of anyone Elizabeth can really take care of herself. Just such a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Ah, unfortunately this fic didn't rock my world too much.
I think the detail was really lacking, the descriptions as well and William sounded really...feminine to me. You also switched names, like William to Spike.
You hadn't really established Buffy's place or her place with William or Angel or whatever.
I'm not trying to sound rude, mean, or obnoxious. But as a review, it's my job to be honest and upfront.
Thank you! I look forward to seeing your other fics since you are quite the recognized author. :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that you didn't really enjoy it, I did try to be as informative as possiable and i thank you for your honesty and i hope that you will continue to read me fics as i have a few new ones i'm posting soon.
just love the update. I am glad that they got Buffy to the hospital. I really do hope that they can save her. She and Spike have to be there for baby Elizabeth. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks i'm glad you are enjoying it.
man, one step forward and 2 steps back. They are both so hot headed that they don't think before they talk and act. I really do hope that they can find Buffy before something REALLY bad happens.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review glad your enjoying it so far, hopefully will be updating soon.
I am just happy that they are not always at each other's throats. And it looks like Buffy might be open to having something with Spike. I hate that Dawn had to get caught in the middle of it, but they worked together (the whole gang) to get her out. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review, will be updating soon.
I am glad that they got a chance to see the baby. And they are having a girl. Spike just knowing that something was wrong and coming home should tell the both of them that they are connected and meant to be. I am glad that she is okay.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review just recently updated hope you enjoy the new chapter.
I can't believe it has been 2 months. Spike is going to either want to kill her for staying away or try to shake some sense into her about them when she shows up. And Sunnydale here they come. I can't wait for the fireworks to start.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I can't believe that she actually left? I just hope that people can talk some sense into her. And I just feel so bad for Spike.
Author's Response: I know i've made her a bit of a B@*#h lol, i'm glad your enjoying it, will be updating very soon.