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Vendetta commented on Chapter Eleven on August 25, 2020 02:16pm Liked


 

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter Eleven on June 07, 2020 01:28pm Liked

Why would a little kid want to move to Los Angeles or an adult for that matter?

“He didn’t think you’d handle it well”. That sounds exactly like the Angel I know always trying to second guess and control a situation.

People seeing each other in romantic ways tend to be obvious even when they are unaware of what they are doing. That’s what makes it so cute!

Even though this fic is unfinished, It works as a standalone with we readers being able to visualize what’s going to happen the next day and in the coming years.

Thanks for all the work!

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Joyce commented on Chapter Ten on June 07, 2020 01:27pm

 Yeah, that particular gift could give a parent the wiggins! 

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Joyce commented on Chapter Nine on June 05, 2020 08:49am

That is an impossible sticky wicket thrown into this mix!

Maddy has a personality like mine re “painfully shy” but with a hair trigger temper.
But how will Willow FIND it?

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Joyce commented on Chapter Eight on June 05, 2020 08:49am

Now they have to worry about how to tell her about Spike. When will they do that? At this age, things are too black and white and she cannot be made to understand about her father.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Seven on June 05, 2020 08:48am

I love how Anya is so compassionate. That was a tearful scene.

Re the wincing. I’d forgotten that Maddy had Dawn’s squeal LOL!

Nice to know that Cassie survived living on the Hellmouth and has flown the coop without a scrape.

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter Six on June 05, 2020 08:47am


Spike just had to go and almost remind Riley in front of Sam about the vamp whores. Yeah, that would have furthered progress. Not.

I’d like to know more about this creation of yours, Nack. Might borrow that name for a demon. (And credit you of course.). If it’s from the comix, I don’t know since I haven’t read them.

They did it! Yay! Loved the little will they or won’t they you had going on.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Five on June 05, 2020 08:46am

Good grief! Them again at the most inopportune time too…. Did they hear the bit about biting?

What”aid” can they give? Full of himself, much. Those bozos just got a taste of the power. Here’s to hoping they stay away for good.

That “piggy” bit is hilarious! Will Maddy continue calling them that?

Glad things are progressing well on the Willow and Oz front.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Four on June 05, 2020 08:45am

I loved the spirit of Tara giving her blessing like that! This was such a sweet and emotional scene. (Yes, I cried also.)

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Joyce commented on Chapter Three on June 05, 2020 08:45am

I’m glad that you had the words coming out naturally like that.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Two on June 05, 2020 08:44am

Nice to see that Faith is still there instead of skedaddling after the baby was born.

That tactic using humans was dirty pool.

Buffy seriously underestimated Novinos. He spent many years under the radar and it’s not surprising that they were caught blindsided.

Yes! You are singing my song about the damn chip!

Go Willow! That was impressive if a bit anti climactic. I had thought The Order would hang aounnd a bit.

OMG you really ramped up the timeline at this chapter end! Guessing something bad happened to Faith…

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Joyce commented on Chapter One on June 05, 2020 08:43am

t’s about time for Xander to have grown up.

LOL re spike mimicking Giles “we’re all doomed” whether or not he knows it. I can’t recall an episode in canon where Giles said that with Spike around.

 

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porn_girl commented on Chapter One on April 22, 2019 09:47pm Liked

I have been rereading your stories, and just wanted to let you know that they are still very much enjoyed, all these years later!

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Holi117 commented on Chapter One on March 30, 2018 07:44pm Liked

Loved reading “Impossible” and had to start on “Maddy Begins” right away... and suddenly find i’ve made it to the end with no more left to read. Loved the story so far and would love to see this finished somehow someway. You’re a brilliant writer, so easy to read and slip away into your stories. I hope someday you might decide to come back and finish it :) 

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Mikkalenko commented on Chapter Eleven on September 15, 2017 03:05am

I really wish you had finished this. I checked your profile and saw it's been a while since you were on last which makes me think this isn't gonna be finished for a while or at all. I just reread the original story and had to reread the sequel as well. (Which was lucky for me since I was trying to figure out what fic it was that Anya adopted a hoard of demon kids). But truly amazing work. Please come back and finish lol.

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JoRo commented on Chapter Eleven on July 27, 2016 06:40am Liked

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onar commented on Chapter Eleven on March 31, 2016 04:28am

I know this is a lot of time later and that you'll probably won't even see this review, but I just discovered these series yesterday while looking through baby fics and I read through Impossible and Anna Begins in one day!! I'd usually say something like post soon but since it's probably not gonna happen after all these years, I'll just say that your stories were really good and that you have a great talent at writing them! I really enjoyed reading! 

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letsgooutintherain commented on Chapter Eleven on March 22, 2016 10:22pm Liked

All those short stories are really nice. I love Maddy, and I like that you can write Oz so well. His voice is really difficult to get right. The idea of Anya and Xander adopting kid after kid is heartwarming. Thank you for the wonderful read :)

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All4Spike commented on Chapter One on April 02, 2015 03:08pm Liked

I just popped in for a re-ead. So disappointed to find this story still incomplete. I'm guessing from how long it's been since you updated, that it will remain that way. Such a shame.... so many questions left unanswered...

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the_bronze commented on Chapter One on July 09, 2014 04:58pm

I'm in live with this story right now but then I noticed the last time you touched it was over 4 years ago. Its a real shame. I Would've loved to know how it ended. Hopefully one day you might return and finish it or if you can't finish it, hand it to someone else

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Mia Vaan commented on Chapter Eleven on May 26, 2014 03:04pm

Really hope this is continued. :)

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Mirandaann commented on Chapter One on February 27, 2014 03:36pm

I really wish this was finished

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jean_pratt commented on Chapter Ten on July 26, 2013 04:14pm Liked

I'm having a hard wrapping my mind around Maddy and how strong she is. I feel like you kind of insinuated in this chapter that Maddy had more power within her than Dawn. Which doesn't make any sense to me cause Dawn is like pure energy.

Is that what your saying? Or is it just she's the closest strongest person?

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ILoveLamp commented on Chapter Eleven on August 16, 2012 06:48pm Liked

Such a great series. Too bad it never received an ending. Although, you could pick and number of points throughout the whole thing that would have made brilliant endings. Add another couple of paragraphs and chapter with Faiths wrap up would have worked so well.

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mhustler commented on Chapter Eleven on October 17, 2011 05:23am Liked

This is a really great story, I really hope you decide to finish it one day!!

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All4Spike commented on Chapter Eleven on August 23, 2011 04:13pm Liked

I have just caught up with this series that I appear to have missed up until now. It's absolutely wonderful - but it's been so long since you updated! I adore Maddy and I want MORE! Please say you haven't abandoned this appealing tale............

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xaphania commented on Chapter Eleven on December 13, 2009 04:39pm Liked

Just finished re-reading this, enjoyed it a lot even on a second read. I think I read on your LJ that you'll upload more soon? I hope so, anyway. Would really like to read more :)

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vladt commented on Chapter Eleven on July 17, 2009 03:51am Liked

maddy and blue. now there is a pair. very entertaining chapter, thank you.

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vladt commented on Chapter Ten on July 17, 2009 03:35am Liked

better and better. thank you.

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vladt commented on Chapter Nine on July 17, 2009 03:21am Liked

caught off guard by red being turn, but maddy still steals all the scenes. very good read, thank you.

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