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Joyce commented on Chapter 17 Impatient to be Free on April 26, 2018 05:05pm Liked

 

Totally unexpected to have a nemesis somewhat rescue Dawn from a far worse fate!

 

Nice touch with the Calamity Jane hit song!   I love that movie and the song.  

 

And ditto on the Hey Jude lyrics!  You fired on all the cylinder with this pic!

 

Author's Response on April 27, 2018 04:08am

Well, I am so pleased and touched that you reviewed so many chapters of this story.  It's lovely to see a reader catching on to all the little clues - like the gun that finally kills Tara, etc.  I thought Sweet had to come and rescue Dawn.  In my "to do one day when I finish the other 5 wips" file, is a story about Sweet and Dawn again.  Thank you once again for such a huge read and I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.

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Joyce commented on Chapter 16 Liam's territory on April 26, 2018 04:47pm Liked

Where Buffy is in this chapter, I was at one place in my life so I can understand it a bit.  So glad I’m long past that.  

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 14 .Plan for the Worst on April 26, 2018 04:32pm Liked

This must not be Caritas.    Not good news for Dawn.  

 

Good touch with the “Wind Beneath My Wings” to needle Buffy.  

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 13 Hope for the Best on April 26, 2018 04:23pm Liked

Ah, Caritas!  It’s a good and safe place as long as they stay there. 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 12 Twelve Hours on April 26, 2018 04:15pm Liked

 

Considering what’s happened,  I would think Buffy would be all post “Older and Far Away” regarding staying at home with Dawn.  

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 11 The Big Plan on April 26, 2018 03:40pm Liked

I understand Dawn wants to be “fast” like a lot of teens.  But I have a hard time understanding it.   I looked after young siblings and cousins and so was not in a hurry to do “it”.  Why be in a hurry to do an act that you know produces babies?   I think it’s immaturity of thinking in the moment instead of consequences.  And that in the moment only comes with younger siblings.    And the whole it’s all about me thing too.   Rant over. 

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 10 Secrets on April 26, 2018 03:28pm Liked

Hoping Dawn does not get into any trouble and I’m all set to buy the Brooklyn Bridge LOL.  

And hoping that Buffy's "NICE" is not so secretive as in canon.  

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Joyce commented on Chapter 9 Demons and Death on April 26, 2018 03:13pm Liked

 

Finally an inkling that Spike is more than he appears is beginning to trickle through the tough Slayer exterior.   And she is consciously aware that she is in active denial.  

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Joyce commented on Chapter 8 Damage Limitation on April 26, 2018 02:42pm Liked

Riley thinking again ..not good thoughts.   I hope the Lynfra situation is cool in the next chapter.  

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Joyce commented on Chapter 6 Damaged on April 26, 2018 02:33pm Liked

 

Ooh, I always love Riley ratcheting up.  He makes such a fool of himself.  

 

Dawn’s situation does not look good. 

 Was it the strawberries?

Looks like a dangerous crossroads coming.  

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Joyce commented on Chapter 5 Squalls on April 26, 2018 02:20pm Liked

So Spike can block without intent to hurt even when angry?  Somehow I would think the emotions would trigger the chip.  

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Joyce commented on Chapter 4 on April 26, 2018 02:08pm Liked

I liked that the confrontation was not such a big one.  At least Spike did not et thrown all over the Bronze.  But this new sticky wicket can be all sorts of dangerous.   Moving along to the next chapter!

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Joyce commented on Chapter 3 Little Flames, Big Fires on April 26, 2018 01:59pm Liked

As a first born, I was in charge of younger kids so I was alone with them before I was 10.  Dawn as a whiny younger one does not get responsibility just yet.  

Good descriptions of storm havoc.   Confrontation next chapter for real this time?  Will buffy step in?  Trying to suss it out beforehand.  

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Joyce commented on Chapter 2 Eye of the Storm on April 26, 2018 01:52pm Liked

What a doofus!  Riley purposefully woke up Dawn.   Will there be a confrontation at the Bronze  if he figures it out?

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Joyce commented on Chapter 1 Gathering Clouds on April 26, 2018 01:40pm Liked

Spike is desperately trying to hide and true feelings and failing miserably to those who have eyes like Joyce.  Only Buffy seems to be in denial.  Enjoyed the chapter.  

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 17 Impatient to be Free on September 25, 2016 03:55pm Liked

I've enjoyed this one since the beginning! As always, I look forward to your next one.

Author's Response on October 01, 2016 05:33am

Ha!  Thank you and I almost screamed "What next one" at the screen!   So I have to get on with Everyone has Secrets,  finish Challenge story and somehow go back and continue with Future Imperfect before the twins are pensionable age!

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 17 Impatient to be Free on September 23, 2016 10:59pm Liked

I’ll accept dollars, blood in pints, pounds of flesh - human or otherwise - but no magic beans, treasure maps or lamps that summon genies. No elderly relatives fit for sacrifice. Anything with more than twelve legs must be caged.  LOL Love this list of acceptable currency.

I am tickled at Sweet being her rescuer.   all my Sweet-things  So he has a few marked eh?  Poor Dawn not even special.  I kinda of like this idea that she is marked and kept track of by Sweet.

a fool who plays it cool by making his world a little colder.  Who would have thought that Sweet would offer such good advice?  That is what happened...she made things so much worse for all of them (especially Spike) with her denials and dirty secrets.

I hope they stay friends in spite of the odds.  I like the idea of human (ish) Dawn being Aunti Dawn to Eriddny’s eventual offspring.  

Buffy would be very angry with Angel for the whole not telling about Connor that's for sure.  I think Dawn is right in not spilling right now though.  It isn't her secret to tell.  

Really enjoyed the story and so glad your muse insisted you finish it.  I LOVE that Sweet is invested in Dawn's well being.

Kathleen

Author's Response on September 24, 2016 12:34pm

Thank you so much for commenting.  Glad you liked the ending.  I was determined to finish it before getting on with challenge story.  Mind you, no one seems to have noticed it is finished!   Apart from on another site where the latest comment was :when you gonna finish this?    Not even a please or thank you!  EF readers are far more polite!!

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moonlight88 commented on Chapter 17 Impatient to be Free on September 22, 2016 10:15pm Liked

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Author's Response on October 01, 2016 05:34am

Thank you so much.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 17 Impatient to be Free on September 22, 2016 02:17pm

I liked the auction scene, well done. Sweet sort of stole this chapter. He was a special kind on the show, so I could see him act like this.

I have enjoyed this story, the "normal" problems and the supernatural ones all combined. Following Dawn and her friend was good and the ending seems a bit hopeful for Buffy and Spike.

Author's Response on September 24, 2016 12:35pm

Thank you.  So glad you liked the story.

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Ubikoctober commented on Chapter 11 The Big Plan on August 31, 2016 05:23am Liked

I'm kind of shipping eriddny and dawn right now... blush

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 16 Liam's territory on August 23, 2016 02:51am Liked

Well now they can go rescue Dawn and get everyone home safe.  

I hate that Buffy still thinks Angel would be so efficient at finding Dawn.  Spike's no slouch and he loves Dawn even if he's not as concerned as I would have expected.

So glad you've returned to finish this one up!

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 15 Love for Sale on August 23, 2016 02:48am Liked

Spike does need to get his mind on saving Dawn and out of the bedroom.  Then again Buffy is a right bitch towards him and ignores his feelings too much.  What a pair.

Dawn is going to be in such trouble.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 14 .Plan for the Worst on August 23, 2016 02:45am Liked

A step maybe but still pretty far from mature.  

Dawn is in serious danger now.  Hope they get there in time.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 13 Hope for the Best on August 23, 2016 02:40am Liked

15 year olds and a bar is never a good mix even if one is a demon.  Kinda scary if Eriddny starts going through that phase too.

Poor Spike always having to compete with Angel for the women he loves.  I don't know why anyone would pick Angel over him but that's his history.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 12 Twelve Hours on August 23, 2016 02:34am Liked

Oh dear  Angel might be a help or he might just make things worse you never really know.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 11 The Big Plan on August 23, 2016 02:29am Liked

 This is not going to end well for Dawn!  So bloody impulsive (then again teens have little to no impulse control).

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 10 Secrets on August 22, 2016 04:29am Liked

I kinda like the idea of Dawn hanging out with demon teens.  Somehow it seems appropriate.

Kathleen

Author's Response on August 22, 2016 05:04am

More than delighted you are re-reading Storm.  Yes, I love the idea of demon teens and all their disgust and disdain of the older people who understand nothing!  Nothing at all!

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 9 Demons and Death on August 22, 2016 04:22am Liked

Joyce facing death might make her see Spike as the better choice for Buffy.  No not normal or human but loyal and strong and I think she knows Spike loves her daughter.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 8 Damage Limitation on August 22, 2016 04:10am Liked

Oh dear mamma's not listening and thinks Dawn is a threat.  

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 7 Being Brave on August 22, 2016 04:05am Liked

Riley is anything but nice and kind.  He is a bully and a needy little boy.

Kathleen

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