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Ali Bell commented on Chapter 48:Epilouge on October 04, 2017 02:47am Liked

Dude, I'm almost ALWAYS on AO3 and I have been waiting for you to update there!!! But I found this on here and I am increasingly happy!!! Such an amazing story! Thank you! 

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Chrismarie143 commented on Chapter 26 on September 15, 2017 06:58pm

How can Buffy be tone deaf when she's a damn singer and has to sing on key? You don't make any sense. 

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loopy commented on Chapter 17 & 18 on June 09, 2017 06:07am Liked

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Special Squirrel commented on Chapter 48:Epilouge on September 14, 2016 09:10am Liked

thank you for writing this I enjoy reading this

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annamatte commented on Chapter 48:Epilouge on March 07, 2016 09:31pm Liked

 Great story! I really enjoyed it. Buffy's gift for Spike is a nice addition of happiness to the epilogue.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 47 on March 07, 2016 09:16pm Liked

I loved Angel in this chapter. He and Cordy were great!

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annamatte commented on Chapter 46 on March 07, 2016 08:45pm Liked

Good chapter! I didn't expect this confession by Angel. Now that Buffy found out what's what, she has to decide if she can forgive Spike for not telling her the secret of his past with Drusilla. In my opinion the fault lies exclusively with Angel, because he was the one who decided that Spike had to keep the secret.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 45 on March 07, 2016 08:15pm Liked

Poor Spike. :(

I liked the chapter, though it was sad. I hope that Buffy will forgive him.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 44 on March 07, 2016 07:22pm Liked

 Joyce is a wise and understanding woman. I'm glad she insisted to ask to Buffy what had happened, so Joyce was able to express her opinion about it. I hope that Buffy will change her mind as soon as possible.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 43 on March 07, 2016 06:54pm Liked

 This chapter is repeated. Anyway good chapter.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 42 on March 07, 2016 06:48pm Liked

This chapter was heartbreaking. Poor Spike. If Buffy had known Drusilla, she would know that Spike was telling the truth. As it is, Buffy is still upset from her previous relationship with Riley and she's afraid of reliving the same nightmare with Spike.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 41 on March 07, 2016 05:03pm Liked

Sadly I think Lilah has succeeded in her intention ... Good chapter! I'm really curious about what will happen in the next chapter.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 40 on March 07, 2016 04:10pm Liked

 Lilah is a worse person than I thought. At least Riley has repented of his actions at the end. Instead she is a cold, ruthless woman.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 39 on March 07, 2016 03:50pm Liked

 Great chapter! I loved it.

I'm glad that Buffy decided to go public with her relationship with Spike. I loved Buffy's declaration of love at the end of the song - beautiful song, by the way. 

I didn't expect that news about Riley. This time nothing can save him from going to jail.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 38 on March 07, 2016 03:19pm Liked

 The moment between Spike and Buffy was moving. Beautiful song.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 37 on March 07, 2016 02:38pm Liked

 So the court trial began. I hope that Riley will be convicted. Anya's comment made me smile.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 36 on March 07, 2016 02:11pm Liked

The last line was very sweet. Spike loves Buffy very much and he must be so happy to know that Buffy wrote every song thinking of him.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 35 on March 07, 2016 12:28pm Liked

Bad Spike! You don't tease a woman in this way! rolleyes1

 

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annamatte commented on Chapter 34 on March 07, 2016 12:05pm Liked

 It's a good thing that Buffy can spend some time with his sister. Dawn noted that Buffy is really happy with Spike.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 33 on March 07, 2016 11:45am Liked

 Sweet chapter. Buffy is in love with Spike but is understandably confused about her feelings after the previous relationship with Riley. I'm really curious about the secrets of Spike's past.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 32 on March 07, 2016 11:29am Liked

Awww... Spike told Buffy that he loves her. He was scared of losing her. That scene was very sweet.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 31 on March 07, 2016 11:13am Liked

Angel and Cordy make a good couple. I'm glad that Buffy admitted to herself that she was missing Spike. She's falling in love with him.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 30 on March 07, 2016 10:47am Liked

I really like Angel in this story. He's a good friend, is a rational person and is protective of Buffy.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 29 on March 07, 2016 08:57am Liked

 Spike had a point to beat Riley, but then he let himself be carried away by anger and now the situation could backfire on him and Buffy.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 28 on March 07, 2016 08:40am Liked

 I liked that Buffy could enter that room. It was the most personal and private part of his house, and Buffy had access to it.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 27 on March 07, 2016 08:18am Liked

Spike doesn't know that Riley has already found out where Buffy is hiding. However, it' nice that Buffy could see Spike's home.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 26 on March 07, 2016 03:01am Liked

 I'm glad to see that despite the bad situation of Buffy, the band continues to be very successful and Buffy's creativity wasn't affected by her problem with Riley.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 25 on March 06, 2016 08:55pm Liked

 Joyce's reaction as a mother is understandable. And she was right to think that every weakness of Buffy could be used against her. 

I loved that Spike told Buffy about his past and Drusilla.

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annamatte commented on Chapter 24 on March 04, 2016 04:37pm Liked

 Naughty Buffy! Spike has really appreciated the surprise. ;)

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annamatte commented on Chapter 23 on March 04, 2016 04:17pm Liked

 The dinner party with their friends was a nice idea and it seems that Buffy had fun.

I loved that Spike hasn't laughed at her poor cooking skills before their friends, but he supported her. He's very sweet with Buffy.

Good chapter. I loved it!

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