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Green commented on Always On My Mind on September 25, 2019 02:06pm

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Joyce commented on Always On My Mind on August 29, 2019 11:27am

Oh ho! Spike describes Buffy’s lips as “peaches”?! Strange since he also calls Angel that.

This is rough and dirty and it will happen again.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Always On My Mind on May 30, 2019 02:22pm

Nope, you're just gonna fuck her.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Always On My Mind on January 16, 2018 06:08am

Ooh, this is very evil Spike. Well-written, if dark.

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lambean commented on Always On My Mind on December 10, 2015 01:29pm

I hear it in the slap of the wipers during the brief shower in the middle of the Mexican idea of spring when the desert blooms for three days and the sun hides for a moment behind cottonball clouds that fill the sky with thunderous rumblings.

this first part was so beautifully written. I could both see it and hear it. It's also a very confusing piece. He wants her and thinks about loving her. Then he gets so made at her and instead of wanting to be with her he wants to punish her.  Even though she ends up enjoying it. It still seems pretty violent especially when he treats he rudely after wards. I'm sure that can't be good for her self esteem.  I would like to see you follow up on this fic. You are definely a good writer

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Anderida commented on Always On My Mind on July 15, 2007 08:48am Liked

This is the second time I've read this and I have to say that I like the way this is written.  Spike's voice is authentic and his thoughts justify his actions.  It makes me wonder about Buffy's POV and also how this relationship is going to develop.

Author's Response: I've never really thought of continuing this particular piece, but now you have me thinking...thank you for your review and I appreciate the support!  :)  And the idea! 

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