I like the back-in-time aspect of this fic. I'm having trouble placing it in present day. It seems early Season 3-ish, but there are certain ways Buffy and Spike act that make it hard to place it there. She acts like she's used to seeing him hang around Sunnydale, but he left at the end of Season 2.[Report This]
Nicely done. I enjoyed it. Was confused by the Thornton though. Thought the name was Dartmoore.
Liked how you interchanged present day with their excursion in the past.
I can see the Council hiding those diaries.
I have seen this story many times but over looked it for one reason or another. Finally tonight I decided to give it a try. Very glad I did :) really good. I loved how you wrote it going back and forth between the two times. :)[Report This]
That was amazing, the symbolism in that clock. You used its rushed noises to emphasise all that was going on and to show how urgent and desperate Buffy is feeling. That was great writing and I am soundly impressed! Where is Spike? Is he talking to that watcher, because he caught what that that baddie knew who the actual slayer was? Will they meet the other slayer, ir just another watcher? I have so many questions! Also, how much trouble is Spike going to be in when he gets home?
It is so odd to see Buffy as the sidekick role and the one who has to follow the rules of her counterpart, because it is always the other way around and Spike is her add on. Hiw do they get home? You did such a great job at keeping conclusions from us even thoigh we are seeing what happens when they get home and you show so many things and keep so many things in the dark and slowly reveal them and gosh it is so thrilling to know yet not know. What a page turner this is! Or, next button clicker I guess, lol.[Report This]
So wonderful. They are a real couple and it is the cutest! Now there are three storylines that we are following, and srill it is not confusing in the least bit. That must have taken quite a lot of skill and effort! I am so into this, I feel like I have been wrapped up abd snuggled in their world. I do not want to let go. Gosh, this story is good!!
Elisabeth was so infatuated with William, and itbis different to see such on open from the start relationship with those two. It is nice every once in a while. They snuck away, kissing agaisnt the table and norms be darned. It is so upseting that almost being raped means that a woman is 'sullied' and not 'proper merchandise' anymore. It makes me furious! Anyway, William did not care about such things and fell madly for that small, spunky girl. And now Spike can fall in love with Buffy. What is up with her using big words, anyway? I love the decent vocabulary on our Buffster. I honesty just love this whole fic.
I like that Buffy is slaying, protecting people and killing the baddies. Spike helping her as her lover and bot just her helper, eep I enjoy eveything that this fic has to offer. They are playing in the snow and have dogs and it is just so happy, and they deserve some happiness!! When are they going to bring up the l word?[Report This]
Haha, I want Spike tocall Giles dad so bad now. I love how cute and domestic Spuffy is even right by her friends. They just fought a demon, why shouldn't they be disheveled? I mean yes they did have sex too, but the gang should not have assumed they did because they got crazy looking from the beat down too.
I really like how we are following two story lines at once, it makes the story very layered and keeps me on my toes. You did it so well, too, I am never confused or frustrated. Bravo, really![Report This]
Haha, the bloody thing won't tie. Spike and Buffy are starting to use each others words, and that is just so great. I like how you started the story off after all of the events in the story, and will mist likely end not too long after that. Good thing Spike grew up in times like this or things would not have gone this smoothly. I like that it is just those two living this bew life and hardly even thinking about home. Bad Buffy for bot thinking about your duties back home, but very good Buffy for finally letting yourself live a little.
Spike holds her while they sleep and will not let go. Every morning he does it, every morning Buffy lets him, and every morning Buffy yells at him to stop doing that. Very cute mornings. It is hard to remember how serious the common cold was back then, how differently people were affected by things like this. They have tgis idd friendship and Iam so looking forward to it growing into a loving marraige, the one that the painter adored so much.
Time travel fics are not usually my thing, but this is so good and well worth the leap of faith. I am liking it very much, the characterisation and dialogue and speed of which these things are playing out. It is all working together so well![Report This]
Oh, I adored this story from start to finish. Apart from a few minor typos or word errors, this was really well-written, like close to professional. I hope you are still out there writing ... I would read your work! And I sorely wish you had more long fics like this here![Report This]