Ratings I'll beta: •NC-17
I can help beta read: •American English •British English •Canon Elements •Plot Suggestions
Turnaround for an average length chapter: 4-7 days
Experience: NOTE: APRIL 2024 - I remain on the beta list, but life is busy as RL impinges hard upon my online & writing life. Write me please have a ready sample you've worked on) and we will see what is possible as I love to beta/edit. Bear in mind that I work with people on other sites as well as editing original fiction.
Also: If I have refused you on multiple occasions, please do not keep asking.
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I've done a lot of informal beta reading and commentary for people (mostly on Twisting the Hellmouth) over the last 10 years.
I've beta'd for several writers on EF as well.
I've written over 1.25 million words of fiction that have been well received.
Although I live in the USA, I grew up in the Commonwealth, so I tend to notice linguistic differences in English usage across the diaspora. (There are differences in English usage beyond just the UK/US, though that is most germane to the stories we write). I don't care how you, the author spells words in your narrative, but how characters speak (and the way they think) differs and that matters a lot. I will be very vigilant about that. I don't know all the minutia of Cockney rhyming slang, but I do know the real origin of Berk...
I'm best at: helping people get canon right, helping people avoid internal inconsistencies and plot holes. Also getting small (especially real-world) details right so that the fantasy is grounded in believable reality. I will edit sex scenes... but I'm brutal about them being good, vital to story and NOT sounding like crappy porno.
Though I am not a grammarian, I am very good about words ... Use the right ones. Use them in correct tense and form... I'm very very good at noticing when people use words like pique, peak and peek interchangeably... DON'T!! The spell check is NOT a substitute for editing.
Important note: I do not hate ANY of the characters. Yes, I will work with someone who shows their work and creates a believable villain, or just a Scooby/former hero going off the rails. Sometimes the story is revealed in the ‘ugly’. No, I won’t facilitate someone’s unprocessed rage by helping them with pure character bashfic. If you truly, floridly hate a character, you cannot be objective when writing them. To create a believable villain OR hero, you need a degree of objectivity. Kill or damage your darlings... Those are what the reader will FEEL.
I actually find I can best get into the heads of the characters that I love the most… and see their darkness.
All that said, I like happy endings.
Story types/topics I will not beta or sensitivity read: Won’t write and
don’t want to beta :
Pure character bashing. (see above)
Mary Sue-ing. There’s NO perfect character in the verse… if they are perfect, they’re god. Just no.
All human. I don’t hate it, but it has zero interest to me. If I already have an ongoing relationship with a great writer, I will consider it and I have read a couple decent ones, but it’s not my cuppa.
Also not so fond of vampire Buffy, though I have seen it done well a couple times.
On screen rape sex, particularly lovingly described. I’m a rape (child sex abuse) survivor. I don’t get a kick over it. That said, I can read and have written about some awful situations. I think the ‘AR’ in Buffy was necessary to the narrative, though I hate it and it turns my stomach and it should be upsetting. I won't be triggered by ugly. I just think the violation of humans (men, women and children) needs to be shown for what it is. VILE.
All my rape related writing has been from the perspective of and with
full sympathy for the victim/survivor. I will get into the head of the bad guy, but I won’t celebrate violation of anyone of
any age for any reason . As a former first responder, I’m not easily squicked, but I have clear feelings that truly non-consensual sex is not ever a good thing.
I will not write, read or beta anything which DESCRIBES sex between an adult and a child (anyone below 17). Brief description of a crime is
not included in this.
Edit 5/21/2021- regarding Blood Play... with clarification. If you have questions about this, please ask and please be specific if you can be.
I am NOT fond of blood play. No, I'm not even slightly squeamish about blood, so writing about situations where there is blood or injury or surgery will not be an issue. Having seen enough of the real thing,
I find bleeding for entertainment not sexy in the slightest. Also, casual biting of the neck is likely to cause a stroke even if it doesn't lead to bleeding to death. Torn carotids bleed out fast. (Yes, I know, i think too much!)
There will (of course) be instances were people are bitten and that's fine - it's part of the genre. I just don't find it romantic.
To be clear: Buffy saving Spike by giving him her blood does NOT bother me.
Buffy as a lovely 'sexy' snack (whether from neck or oral sex ) really really
does b/c
fundamentally, I think it's demeaning and diminishes Buffy as a woman and that is not sexy to me. I don't think menstrual sex is dirty, I just don't see it as a dinner opportunity.
A vampire is a predator. A woman who for fun and giggles gives herself to a vampire as a snack is PREY, not a girlfriend.
By contrast: Being a blood donor (to save or heal someone) whether it's directly from the body, or the more usual way is NOT being prey.
NOTE: While I don't believe that 'claiming' is canon, I
don't have any objection to betaing a mutual 'claim'. (I don't really think of this type of quick exchange as blood play)
Additional Comments: Interest in things medical. Former first responder with a nursing degree.
Good at writing fights & action. Done a lot of research about the military and law enforcement because I tend to write crossovers that include them.
Have been told I'm good at writing sex.
I'm also HUGELY opinionated about writing sex well. You have been warned.
I really, really love crossovers with other fandoms. If you have a crossover idea, run it by me and see if we are fandom compatible. Even if I haven't read/watched your fandon, I am probably game unless it's something I truly dislike. I'm pretty open to new fandoms.
My thread on writing sex:
Blue's sex writing thread
My thread on not misusing words:
Blue's word misuse thread (rant)