New territory for them both. Acceptance. It's good that Buffy isn't pretending he's just a guy. He's a vampire and she needs to come to terms with it because I don't think he's going to be swanning out of her life now.
Buffy's reaction was plausible, considering that Spike was an evil vampire with no cheap in the head. But fortunately she could see that something has changed, that Spike has changed since their last meeting. Good chapter! I loved the last scene.[Report This]
Grabbing her bra from the floor, she fastened the clasp behind her back, picking through the clothes for underwear. She scoffed, he hadn’t gotten her any. Probably figured that she wouldn’t need them... God, he was a pig. LOL. It's so typical of Spike!
Lovely chapter![Report This]
I liked that Spike was honest with Buffy and told her what he felt about their night together. Spike didn't ask her to leave her family and her friends behind, so I think Buffy mainly is afraid of disapproval of them all. Good chapter![Report This]
Good beginning! It was nice to see Buffy struggling with her desire for Spike.
“You came here to tell me you wouldn’t come here?” Spike raised his eyebrows in amusement. Buffy’s head was becoming foggy. She couldn’t be here. This was wrong. That made me smile.[Report This]
Really enjoyed this story! I'm looking forward to a sequel!
Author's Response: Hopefully there will be one, if the other plot bunnies in my head stopping thumping about. I have complete series storming for attention up there. i guess it will depend on which is the loudest when I finish Drowning In You and Leading the Blind.
great first chapter. well written and sets the scene well. i love the back and forth you see between them physically. great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I try to write it with a real "you are there" feeling, like the show has, so I'm glad it came across.