Buffy's reaction was plausible, considering that Spike was an evil vampire with no cheap in the head. But fortunately she could see that something has changed, that Spike has changed since their last meeting. Good chapter! I loved the last scene.[Report This]
Grabbing her bra from the floor, she fastened the clasp behind her back, picking through the clothes for underwear. She scoffed, he hadn’t gotten her any. Probably figured that she wouldn’t need them... God, he was a pig. LOL. It's so typical of Spike!
Lovely chapter![Report This]
I liked that Spike was honest with Buffy and told her what he felt about their night together. Spike didn't ask her to leave her family and her friends behind, so I think Buffy mainly is afraid of disapproval of them all. Good chapter![Report This]
Good beginning! It was nice to see Buffy struggling with her desire for Spike.
“You came here to tell me you wouldn’t come here?” Spike raised his eyebrows in amusement. Buffy’s head was becoming foggy. She couldn’t be here. This was wrong. That made me smile.[Report This]
Really enjoyed this story! I'm looking forward to a sequel!
Author's Response: Hopefully there will be one, if the other plot bunnies in my head stopping thumping about. I have complete series storming for attention up there. i guess it will depend on which is the loudest when I finish Drowning In You and Leading the Blind.
great first chapter. well written and sets the scene well. i love the back and forth you see between them physically. great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I try to write it with a real "you are there" feeling, like the show has, so I'm glad it came across.
Will Spike join the slay fest? I doubt he'd munch on the natives, what with the animal blood in the fridge. Where will he stay? Glad to see they can talk and the relationship is becoming more than just a sex-a-thon.
Author's Response: It always does in the end.
Okay that was hot as hell. Did he just claim her?! *squeak*
I actually wrote this before I had even heard of claim!fic, and ony just realised it had the same things in it. So, unfortunately, there is no claim in this story.
I have mentioned on the bloodshedverse I have thought about doing a sequel (because in chapters yet to be put on the site mention a Black Sabbath that I want to explore) so I may now also look into exploring this half-claim.
Also, Buffy never said "yours", so technically she was never claimed. But I could work around that! =][Report This]